Holing
a 5-7-56 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Bill your 5-7-5 is great, I wonder if you are digging for
to make a swimming pool or a hole to store all the cash
you wished you had. Thanks to who ever is the fault
Gert
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Bill your 5-7-5 is great, I wonder if you are digging for
to make a swimming pool or a hole to store all the cash
you wished you had. Thanks to who ever is the fault
Gert
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Thanks, Gert. If I had the cash, I would be spending it and not digging holes. : )
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned about holing. You used the correct amount of syllables with very good words and good imagery. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Bill, This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned about holing. You used the correct amount of syllables with very good words and good imagery. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
Why? I guess this was successful but is there a deeper meaning? So now that the "shovels ... are excavated," will there be more need to dig more holes? I guess the lawn is still wet...
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Why? I guess this was successful but is there a deeper meaning? So now that the "shovels ... are excavated," will there be more need to dig more holes? I guess the lawn is still wet...
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Ahh grammar.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Bill, with this holing poem I
imagine the old saying, "Digging to China." My mother
always said that when us kids
dug in the yard or, being from
Long Island, the beach. Thank
you for those fond memories.
All the best to you. ~
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Bill, with this holing poem I
imagine the old saying, "Digging to China." My mother
always said that when us kids
dug in the yard or, being from
Long Island, the beach. Thank
you for those fond memories.
All the best to you. ~
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thanks, Regina, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Okay Bill, what are you trying to hide? I hope you know that not everything can be hidden in a deep dark hole. Some things though burried, will reemerge despite our best efforts to hide them and keep them hidden. She will find out eventually. Hell you might even have already confessed in your sleep and she is just waiting to lower the boom. Wait a minute. Am I talking about you or myself?
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Okay Bill, what are you trying to hide? I hope you know that not everything can be hidden in a deep dark hole. Some things though burried, will reemerge despite our best efforts to hide them and keep them hidden. She will find out eventually. Hell you might even have already confessed in your sleep and she is just waiting to lower the boom. Wait a minute. Am I talking about you or myself?
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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What?s in the hole, nomi?
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I will never tell. I dare not. See I was under the influence when I hid it, er... Never mind.
Comment from Jay Squires
Light and darkness. Yin and Yang. Valley and mountain. The way of the middle. Balance is always maintained: There is a moral/ethical paradigm there, don't you agree? Of course, you do. Your poem illustrates it.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Light and darkness. Yin and Yang. Valley and mountain. The way of the middle. Balance is always maintained: There is a moral/ethical paradigm there, don't you agree? Of course, you do. Your poem illustrates it.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Once one removes the filler, what is left is truth. : )
