Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery
Author. I like the way you presented it with the poem
text then the recipe. The image is super looking. The
ingredients seem like they would not complement each
other, but I take your word they do.
Best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

thanks, Jan,
Give it a try - you won't be sorry. :)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

As a response to the temptation prompt this fills the bill but it is a shame you couldn't get the actual recipe to rhyme or at least slant it a bit. If you went to bed on that lot you could find yourself in nightmare land. Lol.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

don't knock it 'til you try it, Pantygynt

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Well, you've managed to tempt me with this culinary creation - you made my mouth water with anticipation. The addition of the thinly sliced apple is the secret ingredient that takes it to the next level. Delicious indeed!

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks, Lisa.
I hope you try it. It really is yummy.

reply by LisaMay on 20-May-2022

I did try it... different cheese though. I didn't have swiss at home but I did have an apple.

reply by the author on 20-May-2022

I'm scared to ask, since you didn't elaborate, did you like it?

reply by LisaMay on 20-May-2022

Delicious indeed was my verdict! Probably even better with Swiss cheese which I will have next time.

reply by the author on 20-May-2022

oh, I'm so glad! thanks for trying it and for telling me!

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I read this at the worst time - just left the house for my commute to work, and now I'm ravenous! Excellent descriptions and an awesome sounding sandwich. Mayhap you should write cook books :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Well, Mike,
I'm sorry it was at a bad time, but hope you will try it.
It really is good.
Thanks for your comments.

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Good

It is a good poem. The rhyming scheme works well enough. I wasn't sure what T-Whistlin' meant. I guess it's something good. I wish the poem had been a bit longer with more elaboration. What made you think of this combination of ingredients? Why is it tempting~~lots of calories? Lactose intolerance? Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

It's good because it tastes divine. I like to experiment with flavors and textures. Try it and see what you think.
T-Whistlin' is from Pinocchio, an expression I use a lot, meaning great.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 20-May-2022

Thanks, I will. I don't remember that expression.

reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Jiminy Cricket was talking to Pinocchio about something, forgot what, and said, "That is a T-Whistlin' idea!" As you can see, it's stuck with me :)

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 20-May-2022

LOL~ a fun memory for you!