Shucks
a five-line poem16 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very good Five Line poem and it let's us know you were not a happy camper with the rain stopping your grass cutting. Maybe it will dry up soon. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Bill, This is a very good Five Line poem and it let's us know you were not a happy camper with the rain stopping your grass cutting. Maybe it will dry up soon. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings Teri
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from nomi338
Come on Bill, are you really that upset, or are you silently thankful that you can put off this lousy chore for a little while longer? Let me tell you, as I am now 79 years old, I gladly pay my gardener $40.00 a month for doing the bang up job he performs every two weeks.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Come on Bill, are you really that upset, or are you silently thankful that you can put off this lousy chore for a little while longer? Let me tell you, as I am now 79 years old, I gladly pay my gardener $40.00 a month for doing the bang up job he performs every two weeks.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Things are a bit pricier here, I?m afraid. Forty bucks will get me a kid with an old Toys r Us mower.
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Things are a bit pricier here, I?m afraid. Forty bucks will get me a kid with an old Toys r Us mower.
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Sucks to be you and in your situation.
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Simper
Comment from jessizero
You made me laugh aloud at this. I have heard my father say something very similar before. Thanks for sharing your five-line poem here, and best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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You made me laugh aloud at this. I have heard my father say something very similar before. Thanks for sharing your five-line poem here, and best wishes.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thanks, Jessizero, for sharing my dismay. : )
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love this one, Bill. Isn't it a pain when, gosh darn it, that pesky rain means we have to put off our favourite job for another day? May you be able to exhaust yourself with tedium soon ;-)
Mike
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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I love this one, Bill. Isn't it a pain when, gosh darn it, that pesky rain means we have to put off our favourite job for another day? May you be able to exhaust yourself with tedium soon ;-)
Mike
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thanks, Mike. Yes, and the stuff grows three inches a day it seems.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, you really have an excellent excuse to be indoors and writing about poem about not mowing the lawn. Don't mow a wet lawn! Thanks for the funny poem. Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Lol. Well, you really have an excellent excuse to be indoors and writing about poem about not mowing the lawn. Don't mow a wet lawn! Thanks for the funny poem. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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My last excuse was that I couldn't find the lawn mower. My wife pointed to me, then the shed, where I, the lawn mower, could find the appropriate machine.
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a fun and irreverant entry for the 5 line poem contest, which works well. Would you by any chance be a bit lazy and thankful for any excuse to escape the chores?
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reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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This is a fun and irreverant entry for the 5 line poem contest, which works well. Would you by any chance be a bit lazy and thankful for any excuse to escape the chores?
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Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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I actually wanted to mow the lawn. Oh, who am I kidding?
