Sweet Summer Scene
A lovely dream this.....9 total reviews
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a flawless piece about the beauty of summer. Summer rain is my absolute favorite weather. Your liberation is flawless. I feel this will do very well in the contest! Well done!
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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This is a flawless piece about the beauty of summer. Summer rain is my absolute favorite weather. Your liberation is flawless. I feel this will do very well in the contest! Well done!
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Thank you for this great review. :)
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
A very nice depiction of a spring or summer day. The selected picture really adds to your words. You effectively used all of the required words to present a soothing rhyme.
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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A very nice depiction of a spring or summer day. The selected picture really adds to your words. You effectively used all of the required words to present a soothing rhyme.
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I loved it and your graphic is superb! The rhyme scheme is on point and doesn't seem forced. The verses/stanza read well because of this and the time and care you obviously put into this piece. Good luck in the contest. I will be surprised if you do not place in the top tier.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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I loved it and your graphic is superb! The rhyme scheme is on point and doesn't seem forced. The verses/stanza read well because of this and the time and care you obviously put into this piece. Good luck in the contest. I will be surprised if you do not place in the top tier.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it means so much to me. I really appreciate it. :)
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You are most welcome.
Comment from zanya
A great alliterative title to begin with leading into a description of an uplifting Summer scene with superb imagery 'tree tops sway as warm wind sighs'
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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A great alliterative title to begin with leading into a description of an uplifting Summer scene with superb imagery 'tree tops sway as warm wind sighs'
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review...it makes my day. :)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I can not believe how pretty the picture is and how real it looks. And yes, those birds will return from the south. The eagle will watch from the highest tree top. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I can not believe how pretty the picture is and how real it looks. And yes, those birds will return from the south. The eagle will watch from the highest tree top. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, have a wonderful day. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
You did a good job writing this poem with the required vocabulary. I actually checked to make sure you had them all. LOL. I like your Shakespeare reference, too. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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You did a good job writing this poem with the required vocabulary. I actually checked to make sure you had them all. LOL. I like your Shakespeare reference, too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from Pantygynt
Good rhymes an for the most part excellent metre. With the latter you should always try to get an important word on the stressed syllable. I think with this I would have tried to find something more important than 'that's':
'soft rain that's long overdue...' >> Why not try:
'soft rain long time overdue...' ? >> Just a thought.
'Sur[e]ly we should count the blessings,' >> missing 'e'.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Good rhymes an for the most part excellent metre. With the latter you should always try to get an important word on the stressed syllable. I think with this I would have tried to find something more important than 'that's':
'soft rain that's long overdue...' >> Why not try:
'soft rain long time overdue...' ? >> Just a thought.
'Sur[e]ly we should count the blessings,' >> missing 'e'.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you for this nice review and for the corrections. Both are very appreciated. :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
What a lovely ode to summer and its fleeting nature! The way you interspersed the words was very clever. They were barely noticeable. The whole poem gave me warm and sweet thoughts of summer and the way it flies by so quickly, reminding me we should surely enjoy every moment. Thanks a bunch and good luck!
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
What a lovely ode to summer and its fleeting nature! The way you interspersed the words was very clever. They were barely noticeable. The whole poem gave me warm and sweet thoughts of summer and the way it flies by so quickly, reminding me we should surely enjoy every moment. Thanks a bunch and good luck!
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you, I'm so glad you like it. Have a very nice evening. :)
Comment from papa55mike
Summer is a fleeting moment, while winter seems to go on forever. I still haven't started complaining about the heat yet, but it will come. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Summer is a fleeting moment, while winter seems to go on forever. I still haven't started complaining about the heat yet, but it will come. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for your kind words. :)
