Enemas Can Be Dangerous
No good deed goes unpunished, so Hans found out.4 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very fun story in 100 word dash. I do not think I can look at a bottle of Pepto Bismol now without thinking of your story.
Very creative and clever telling.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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A very fun story in 100 word dash. I do not think I can look at a bottle of Pepto Bismol now without thinking of your story.
Very creative and clever telling.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Thank you for your read and feedback. Appreciated. Just be happy you don't have an elephant who is constipated.
Comment from LisaMay
What a shitty day poor Hans had. Got his hans dirty, haha. He should've waited for the fruit to do its work before trying the enema. Your story is gross but well written. I'm pleased to see that this elephant's health was being attended to. The moral of the story is 'keep away from the rear end of an elephant'.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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What a shitty day poor Hans had. Got his hans dirty, haha. He should've waited for the fruit to do its work before trying the enema. Your story is gross but well written. I'm pleased to see that this elephant's health was being attended to. The moral of the story is 'keep away from the rear end of an elephant'.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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And always know that shit can happen. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness! How dreadful, but I expect all animals are constipated from time to time, but being covered in elephant poop is not the best way to spend an afternoon, he he he, a fun write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Oh my goodness! How dreadful, but I expect all animals are constipated from time to time, but being covered in elephant poop is not the best way to spend an afternoon, he he he, a fun write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thanks for the read and the review. And always remember that shit can happen.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem for the 100-word dash. You kept the story light and humorous and that allowed you to tell a complete story in a short word count. Very well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Great poem for the 100-word dash. You kept the story light and humorous and that allowed you to tell a complete story in a short word count. Very well done and good luck.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you for the read and encouraging review. Appreciated.
