Comment from Bridge

Excellent

I loved your poem. I loved your creative approach. Blitz poems are fun . Very well written. I love the last two lines. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 17-May-2022

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reply by the author on 17-May-2022

thank you bridge! :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and very well written Blitz poem you have penned about the brain and how it works. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. You are really good at these type of poems! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 17-May-2022

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reply by the author on 17-May-2022

lol thank you teri! :)

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Exceptional

I'm telling you right now - this is the winner! The research you did for this is obvious (unless you're a brain surgeon), and I enjoyed the semi-loop poetry form. Very well thought out and fun.

 Comment Written 17-May-2022

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reply by the author on 17-May-2022

hehe thank you so much! :-)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

The style worked well to share your thoughts on the brain,
Mystery Author. The image is simple, but perfect, for your
well chosen words. Those words a filled with good imagery
and thoughts that flowed from your brain to the page. I like
the color scheme where the highlighted words pertain to
the author (narrator) of this poem. It does read quickly.
Best wishes, Jan

 Comment Written 17-May-2022

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reply by the author on 17-May-2022

thank you jan! :)

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello Mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your can hippo...be controlled entry it's like a blitz poem had a one night stand with repetition and birthed your poem. Great job and good luck.

 Comment Written 17-May-2022

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reply by the author on 17-May-2022

LOL! thank you 13 :-)