Tenacity of Life
5-line poem for the contest36 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I love willow trees. I am happy the tree's life goes on... it's a very zen concept. It made me think of "the Giving Tree" by Shel Silverstein.
Thank you for sharing such sweet memory with us. â?¡
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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I love willow trees. I am happy the tree's life goes on... it's a very zen concept. It made me think of "the Giving Tree" by Shel Silverstein.
Thank you for sharing such sweet memory with us. â?¡
Comment Written 19-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you, Gypsy! Yes, trees are an important part of human history. Hugs!!
Comment from Janetsue
Life after destruction is a marvelous thing to see. I put in a lot of plants in a bare spot in our apartment complex last year and the lawncare people cut them all down. I was very upset. However, the roots must have been hardy because new growth sprouted recently and the plants are now flourishing. ....I put stone borders around them all so it would not happed again. Best wishes in the contest, Helen! :-)
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Life after destruction is a marvelous thing to see. I put in a lot of plants in a bare spot in our apartment complex last year and the lawncare people cut them all down. I was very upset. However, the roots must have been hardy because new growth sprouted recently and the plants are now flourishing. ....I put stone borders around them all so it would not happed again. Best wishes in the contest, Helen! :-)
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Janet! I'm glad for your hardy plants! Hooray!
Appreciate your time reviewing and the super six stars!
Hugs!!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
There is a saying," nature finds a way.' I find that appropriate
after reading your poem. Did you take this photo ? Nature is
truly remarkable You left a strong provocative message using
5 lines of poetry, well done.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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There is a saying," nature finds a way.' I find that appropriate
after reading your poem. Did you take this photo ? Nature is
truly remarkable You left a strong provocative message using
5 lines of poetry, well done.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Yes, I did take the picture. Thank you for the lovely review! Bless you!
Comment from Spitfire
Excellent entry. It is amazing how plants can regenerate themselves. Alliteration with willow, wings; fall and feathered; laid and leaves. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Excellent entry. It is amazing how plants can regenerate themselves. Alliteration with willow, wings; fall and feathered; laid and leaves. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Shari! How are you feeling? I was expecting you to post on the weekend but didn't see your finale. I hope you will share the conclusion on the weekend. Appreciate the super rating! Hugs!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Helen,
Congratulations on the All Time Best award. Well done on the poem. Isn't it amazing how some life forms just don't want to give up? The frustrating part is when you're trying to get something to grow, like bedding plants, and they won't take hold. Life is a mystery.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Hello Helen,
Congratulations on the All Time Best award. Well done on the poem. Isn't it amazing how some life forms just don't want to give up? The frustrating part is when you're trying to get something to grow, like bedding plants, and they won't take hold. Life is a mystery.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you, Tom! I would imagine you always get All Time Best for your posts.
Yes, life is a mystery - dandelions and willows won't give up but well, some houseplants just teeter on existence.
Hugs and blessings!
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Hello Helen, no, I only wish I did. If that were the case, my head would be so big that my hat wouldn't fit.
Blessings
Tom
Comment from Pearl Edwards
It's lovely when a tree re shoots and in particular this one that was cut down. Nature 's determination at work. Nicely done with your 5 line poem Helen and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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It's lovely when a tree re shoots and in particular this one that was cut down. Nature 's determination at work. Nicely done with your 5 line poem Helen and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you, Valda! I need the luck as I'm sure the competition is stiff. Hugs!
Comment from Carol Clark2
Nature triumphs over technology! Lol! Great photo. In our city, they cut out the branches that surround the power lines, leaving the trees looking a mess. Guess we need a way to peacefully coexist with nature. Blessings, and best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Nature triumphs over technology! Lol! Great photo. In our city, they cut out the branches that surround the power lines, leaving the trees looking a mess. Guess we need a way to peacefully coexist with nature. Blessings, and best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Lol. Actually, I'm afraid the trees might win. At least, it gives the tree trimmers employment!
Thanks for sharing and reviewing, Carol!
Hugs!!
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You're welcome. Enjoyed it!
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've put your interesting observation into a short poem, perfect for this contest, Helen. We've had a lot of trees cut down in preparation for a few new communities in our neighbourhood, this past year. But nothing much has happened lately and we are seeing new shoots springing from the fallen branches too.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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You've put your interesting observation into a short poem, perfect for this contest, Helen. We've had a lot of trees cut down in preparation for a few new communities in our neighbourhood, this past year. But nothing much has happened lately and we are seeing new shoots springing from the fallen branches too.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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It's amazing to see how life keeps sprouting even without roots! Thanks so much ,Judy! Hugs!
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You're most welcome, Helen. Nature sure is amazing!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
In nature, sometimes the death of some can bring life to another. I have never given much thought to life beyond the grave and death is so final and we are gone forever and only remembered for a while by those we leave behind. A poignant write Helen, food for thought, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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In nature, sometimes the death of some can bring life to another. I have never given much thought to life beyond the grave and death is so final and we are gone forever and only remembered for a while by those we leave behind. A poignant write Helen, food for thought, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 19-May-2022
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Thank you, Dolly! I see this kind of natural phenomenon as a reminder that God does control life and we do have hope beyond this world. Hugs!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Trees are amazing, aren't they? They can split, lose half their limbs, or even get cut to pieces and still produce leaves and blooms. Your poem is descriptive and appealing.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Trees are amazing, aren't they? They can split, lose half their limbs, or even get cut to pieces and still produce leaves and blooms. Your poem is descriptive and appealing.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you, Janice! And all varieties of willows seem intent on sticking around. Lol.
Hugs!
