Springtime Rapture
A very short poem13 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The rain and the sun do bring a brilliance of beauty. Like your image and poem. We need the sun to bring some warmth so the flowers can blossom which are sprouting from the ground.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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The rain and the sun do bring a brilliance of beauty. Like your image and poem. We need the sun to bring some warmth so the flowers can blossom which are sprouting from the ground.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Many thanks, Rosemary, for sharing and reviewing my poem.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
A very nice to welcome in the coming Spring/Summer season. Here, in Michigan, we get very little of that "Sun" you speak of, but we have plenty of beauty after the rain.
A very uplifting and hopeful thought, thanks.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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A very nice to welcome in the coming Spring/Summer season. Here, in Michigan, we get very little of that "Sun" you speak of, but we have plenty of beauty after the rain.
A very uplifting and hopeful thought, thanks.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Gary, for sharing and reviewing my poem.
Comment from Bill Schott
This tetractys, Springtime Rapture, has the proper formatting and shows the readers an example of this eruption of growth to move the season into full force.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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This tetractys, Springtime Rapture, has the proper formatting and shows the readers an example of this eruption of growth to move the season into full force.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Bill, for your review of my Tetractys.
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I need to thank you for teaching me a new word. I'm in my 40s and this is the first time I've heard the word 'Ebullience'. I like it! Now I want an excuse to use it.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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I need to thank you for teaching me a new word. I'm in my 40s and this is the first time I've heard the word 'Ebullience'. I like it! Now I want an excuse to use it.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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"Ebullience" is a word my mouth loves to say. I am so pleased I could introduce you to it, Sarah. Many thanks for sharing my poem.
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely sense of joy and exuberance in this delightful one. It's as though all nature is pleased to show off. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Lovely sense of joy and exuberance in this delightful one. It's as though all nature is pleased to show off. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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It is raining gently today where I live and nature is indeed showing off. Many thanks, Wendy, for sharing and praising my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
An awesome entry for the Tetractys Contest. It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
The theme about nature is beautiful as the presentation.
Well done! I wish you the best in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Hello,
An awesome entry for the Tetractys Contest. It flows well with beautifully descriptive words that paint a clear mental picture.
The theme about nature is beautiful as the presentation.
Well done! I wish you the best in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Gypsy, for your lavish praise of my poem.
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely tetractys that celebrates spring with its sudden moods from rains and storms and sudden sunshine that puts the spotlight on all the blooming beauty. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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A lovely tetractys that celebrates spring with its sudden moods from rains and storms and sudden sunshine that puts the spotlight on all the blooming beauty. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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It always surprises me how Nature flourishes right after a soaking rain. Many thanks for sharing and praising my poem.
Comment from Michele Harber
What a lovely use of the poem's parameters, and what a perfect picture to accompany your words. "Ebullience of beauty" is a very powerful phrase that really gets across the degree of beauty. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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What a lovely use of the poem's parameters, and what a perfect picture to accompany your words. "Ebullience of beauty" is a very powerful phrase that really gets across the degree of beauty. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem and the artwork, Michele. Many thanks for sharing.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a truly lovely poem which I have just seen right here around me. The rain ended and the world is full of blossoms. You've picked a very attractive picture also. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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This is a truly lovely poem which I have just seen right here around me. The rain ended and the world is full of blossoms. You've picked a very attractive picture also. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you so much for your praise of my poem, Carol.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi author, your poem has good imagery. I can see it.
I especially liked:
and Earth erupts with sudden ebullience of beauty.
(I like the above because the reader can envision their
own beautyu.)
Lovely photo. I'd love to go there for about a month.
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Hi author, your poem has good imagery. I can see it.
I especially liked:
and Earth erupts with sudden ebullience of beauty.
(I like the above because the reader can envision their
own beautyu.)
Lovely photo. I'd love to go there for about a month.
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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I am delighted you enjoyed my poem, Latebloomer, and can see the imagery. Many thanks for sharing.
