Feelings of Love
Love Contest7 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I was watching a movie recently where this kind of scenario took place. Was this episode where it was a final embrace? He must have walked away feeling either glad or sad.
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I was watching a movie recently where this kind of scenario took place. Was this episode where it was a final embrace? He must have walked away feeling either glad or sad.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, very good sensory appeal.
This is what I call an ooh-la-la poem.
I especially liked:
with feelings of her
still on his lips
(Yes)
Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
Can't wait to see who wrote this poem. Blind entries bring out the best writing. LateBloomer
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Hello author, very good sensory appeal.
This is what I call an ooh-la-la poem.
I especially liked:
with feelings of her
still on his lips
(Yes)
Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
Can't wait to see who wrote this poem. Blind entries bring out the best writing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 16-May-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is no difference to me than them dying. And leaves you feeling dead inside. There is no happiness. No matter where you go, you can not be happy. You can not sleep or eat. Everything around feels like a black hole.
Thank you for sharing. I do relate.
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This is no difference to me than them dying. And leaves you feeling dead inside. There is no happiness. No matter where you go, you can not be happy. You can not sleep or eat. Everything around feels like a black hole.
Thank you for sharing. I do relate.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
Comment from Pantygynt
An eleven word total ensures that this little gem qualifies within the thirteen word total allowed in this contest. Despite his retreat, the other two lines establish the romantic message required.
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An eleven word total ensures that this little gem qualifies within the thirteen word total allowed in this contest. Despite his retreat, the other two lines establish the romantic message required.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Fellow poet thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a good day!
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Hello Fellow poet thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the contest. Good job and good luck in the contest. Have a good day!
Comment Written 16-May-2022
Comment from Michele Harber
What a lovely, romantic and sensual poem. You make it easy to feel the warmth of her lips on his. You made excellent use of the prompt, and the beautiful picture you chose perfectly enhances your words.
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What a lovely, romantic and sensual poem. You make it easy to feel the warmth of her lips on his. You made excellent use of the prompt, and the beautiful picture you chose perfectly enhances your words.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from Fleedleflump
Aww, I love this. It reminds me of the end of my first date with my wife - feelings on my lips not from a kiss, but from words exchanged that sparked a long burning fire. Of course your piece could also be interpreted as tragic, depending on how permanent the 'walked away' is, but for me it's a positive message.
Mike
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Aww, I love this. It reminds me of the end of my first date with my wife - feelings on my lips not from a kiss, but from words exchanged that sparked a long burning fire. Of course your piece could also be interpreted as tragic, depending on how permanent the 'walked away' is, but for me it's a positive message.
Mike
Comment Written 15-May-2022
