Love Is Eternal
Another lamentation for my deceased wife50 total reviews
Comment from DeboraDyess
Jay, everyone wants to be loved this way! Your heart's song, though sad, is so tremendous. I love it when you write about her...
Blessings to you, my sweet friend,
Deb
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Jay, everyone wants to be loved this way! Your heart's song, though sad, is so tremendous. I love it when you write about her...
Blessings to you, my sweet friend,
Deb
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from Ulla
And Jay, I'm so glad that you do, because they give me joy to read. You love for your late wife flows through every word. I can understand your need for writing these poems. All best, Ulla:)))
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And Jay, I'm so glad that you do, because they give me joy to read. You love for your late wife flows through every word. I can understand your need for writing these poems. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from Fei Ma
This is most amazing! I came across this poem today, it captured my heart. I figured the author is 97 years young, in deep love, in love with his long time lover - his wife who is no longer with him. I admire the author's mind and spirit, and a truly forever love affair! As the title says, love is eternal ! I am one who never doubt that love can last forever, and this poem is a proof. I am wondering what hormone is responsible for ever lasting love. I wish the author peace and healthiness.
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This is most amazing! I came across this poem today, it captured my heart. I figured the author is 97 years young, in deep love, in love with his long time lover - his wife who is no longer with him. I admire the author's mind and spirit, and a truly forever love affair! As the title says, love is eternal ! I am one who never doubt that love can last forever, and this poem is a proof. I am wondering what hormone is responsible for ever lasting love. I wish the author peace and healthiness.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
Thank you for sharing your beautiful love poems with us Jay. They are an inspiration to us to cherish what we have while we have it since tomorrow is promised to no one.
Blessings and stay well and keep writing.
Janet
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful love poems with us Jay. They are an inspiration to us to cherish what we have while we have it since tomorrow is promised to no one.
Blessings and stay well and keep writing.
Janet
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from Michele Harber
What a beautiful, romantic and loving poem. I particularly enjoyed how you expressed your love through the lines, "When I was yours and you were mine," and "when you had me and I had you." The similar phrasing also helps to give your poem cohesion. As always, your poem flows smoothly, and your rhymes work perfectly. I was particularly impressed with "world" and "unfurled."
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What a beautiful, romantic and loving poem. I particularly enjoyed how you expressed your love through the lines, "When I was yours and you were mine," and "when you had me and I had you." The similar phrasing also helps to give your poem cohesion. As always, your poem flows smoothly, and your rhymes work perfectly. I was particularly impressed with "world" and "unfurled."
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you, once again, for sharing your beloved wife with us. I can tell your love for each other was true unconditional love. The way a marriage should be. I am sure your wife is smiling down at your poems.
Whin I was yours and you were mine. (When???)
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Thank you, once again, for sharing your beloved wife with us. I can tell your love for each other was true unconditional love. The way a marriage should be. I am sure your wife is smiling down at your poems.
Whin I was yours and you were mine. (When???)
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
It warms my heart when I read your tributary poems to your wife. Writing to, and about her keeps her memory fresh and alive. All of the Romantics on this site love reading poetry about undying love. Plus, writing about her helps us get to know her also.
Note: Whin I was yours and you were mine. ('When' I was yours...)
Thank you for sharing.
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It warms my heart when I read your tributary poems to your wife. Writing to, and about her keeps her memory fresh and alive. All of the Romantics on this site love reading poetry about undying love. Plus, writing about her helps us get to know her also.
Note: Whin I was yours and you were mine. ('When' I was yours...)
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from Sharon Davis
Your writing is inspirational in that it demonstrates the essence of an enduring love and commitment.
A lovely and positive piece.
Thanks for sharing.
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Your writing is inspirational in that it demonstrates the essence of an enduring love and commitment.
A lovely and positive piece.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. I like your poetry. It is good that you keep writing these poems. Good for you. Excellent work! Nice.
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. I like your poetry. It is good that you keep writing these poems. Good for you. Excellent work! Nice.
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Comment Written 15-May-2022
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh, This is so sweet, Bill. What lovely verse to reflect the love you have for your wife. Your meter and rhyme was very well done and I enjoyed the words of love to your beloved. Well done. NAncy:)
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Oh, This is so sweet, Bill. What lovely verse to reflect the love you have for your wife. Your meter and rhyme was very well done and I enjoyed the words of love to your beloved. Well done. NAncy:)
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Comment Written 15-May-2022
