Seeking Truth
One must be careful when consuming the news.10 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Brilliantly done, Harry! I had recently read about this bird conspiracy theory and if indeed Mr. "Tarlson" or is it Liarson on Jackal News covered it, I bet he neglected to mention that it was a made up prank by a millennial who continues to enjoy the fame his conspiracy gave him.
Yours was the only one that made me laugh. Hope you win!!
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Brilliantly done, Harry! I had recently read about this bird conspiracy theory and if indeed Mr. "Tarlson" or is it Liarson on Jackal News covered it, I bet he neglected to mention that it was a made up prank by a millennial who continues to enjoy the fame his conspiracy gave him.
Yours was the only one that made me laugh. Hope you win!!
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging feedback. Glad you enjoyed the piece.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When you think of standing up for the truth of a fact, or of what's really right in the world, you have to think of it as standing up for yourself. Follow me with these comments.....if others believe falsity, it impacts us because those people accept a false reality, and live according to that unreality, essentially bringing false ways of living into reality and making it "unreal". per Internet
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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When you think of standing up for the truth of a fact, or of what's really right in the world, you have to think of it as standing up for yourself. Follow me with these comments.....if others believe falsity, it impacts us because those people accept a false reality, and live according to that unreality, essentially bringing false ways of living into reality and making it "unreal". per Internet
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Could not agree more. Thanks for your read and feedback.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
"Clucker" Tarlson, Cillary Hinton; classic. I really like Tucker but a joke is a joke, right? Cillary was already a joke so that one didn't count.
"Standing Stone?" Great imagination you have there.
Actually, this scenario almost sounds plausible, scary but possible.
Fun read, thanks.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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"Clucker" Tarlson, Cillary Hinton; classic. I really like Tucker but a joke is a joke, right? Cillary was already a joke so that one didn't count.
"Standing Stone?" Great imagination you have there.
Actually, this scenario almost sounds plausible, scary but possible.
Fun read, thanks.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Appreciated. Yeah, after I wrote it I thought it a bit scary also.
Comment from Kim Kinakin Tuckey
Clucker Tarlesen??? ....I absolutely love it. That is a very witty play on words. I thought you did a fantastic job. Good luck with the contest. Very well done.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Clucker Tarlesen??? ....I absolutely love it. That is a very witty play on words. I thought you did a fantastic job. Good luck with the contest. Very well done.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback. Much appreciated.
Comment from Frank Malley
"Seeking Truth" attempts to be a satire mocking the preposterous claims that are made by some conspiracy theorists. However, the writer doesn't have a clear position regarding the details under consideration, and the effort to build a ridiculous story out of some contrast between the insane synthetic birds theory and some obviously real evidence fails to consistently make the telling, exaggerated comparisons that often make a satire work. A rewrite and a critical review by an English teacher would probably help.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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"Seeking Truth" attempts to be a satire mocking the preposterous claims that are made by some conspiracy theorists. However, the writer doesn't have a clear position regarding the details under consideration, and the effort to build a ridiculous story out of some contrast between the insane synthetic birds theory and some obviously real evidence fails to consistently make the telling, exaggerated comparisons that often make a satire work. A rewrite and a critical review by an English teacher would probably help.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thanks for your opinion.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello HarryT a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I really enjoyed your truth sensor entry it was engaging and humorous. Great job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Hello HarryT a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I really enjoyed your truth sensor entry it was engaging and humorous. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for your read and positive feedback.
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Your article takes imagination to a whole new level! I agree that you cannot believe everything you hear - especially on the news. However, reasonable people should be reasonable.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Your article takes imagination to a whole new level! I agree that you cannot believe everything you hear - especially on the news. However, reasonable people should be reasonable.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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If only it were true. My hope is fading that most of us are reasonable. Thanks for your read and feedback.
Comment from robyn corum
HT,
hahahahaha!!! This was so much fun! I'm very, very, very sorry that you haven't promoted it so that others will not get to read it. It's just so frustrating though, that you've so cleverly disguised all the names. I would be interested in knowing who all those folks are, but I cannot -- for the life of me - decipher your very clever code. Have you, by chance, worked for the CIA or FBI before??? Hmmm... I feeeeel like I should be able to do this. Like the names are right there... on the tip of my tongue... --sigh-- But no.
I just don't have a clue!
What a lot of fun! Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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HT,
hahahahaha!!! This was so much fun! I'm very, very, very sorry that you haven't promoted it so that others will not get to read it. It's just so frustrating though, that you've so cleverly disguised all the names. I would be interested in knowing who all those folks are, but I cannot -- for the life of me - decipher your very clever code. Have you, by chance, worked for the CIA or FBI before??? Hmmm... I feeeeel like I should be able to do this. Like the names are right there... on the tip of my tongue... --sigh-- But no.
I just don't have a clue!
What a lot of fun! Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Try reversing the first letters of the first and last name. Thanks for the read and I will promote it.
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
This is such a fun read. It is funny because some people truly do believe that birds are not real. I recently just got myself a pet Cockatiel. His name is Keiko and he is my baby. He is very sweet and smart! Thank you for sharing.
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Hello!
This is such a fun read. It is funny because some people truly do believe that birds are not real. I recently just got myself a pet Cockatiel. His name is Keiko and he is my baby. He is very sweet and smart! Thank you for sharing.
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Have fun with your real bird. I'm sure you checked him out for eye cameras and hidden mikes. Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from jessizero
This was amusing. I hope you intended it to be this way. I can't imagine mechanical birds. LOL. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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This was amusing. I hope you intended it to be this way. I can't imagine mechanical birds. LOL. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
