haiku (Monet's Spring Garden)
haiku contest15 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
haiku (Monets Garden)
Val Crisson your entry for the haiku as you are referring to Monet's panting of a spring garden with your words of how you are unpressed with
the beauty of the garden
Gert
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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haiku (Monets Garden)
Val Crisson your entry for the haiku as you are referring to Monet's panting of a spring garden with your words of how you are unpressed with
the beauty of the garden
Gert
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you, Gert. Good to hear from you
Comment from C2
I love the sense of humor conveyed in your haiku. I could see you smiling while writing that last line. Just goes to prove those Japanese structures don't always have to display somber images! Thanks for sharing.
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I love the sense of humor conveyed in your haiku. I could see you smiling while writing that last line. Just goes to prove those Japanese structures don't always have to display somber images! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from royowen
We've been there too, money's paintings are unique, when I heard of Andy Warhol artwork of Marilyn Monroe, of $281,000,000 I was flabbergasted, I wouldn't put it in the same class as Monet's work, or darden. Beautifully written blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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We've been there too, money's paintings are unique, when I heard of Andy Warhol artwork of Marilyn Monroe, of $281,000,000 I was flabbergasted, I wouldn't put it in the same class as Monet's work, or darden. Beautifully written blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you, Roy
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Welcome Val
Comment from Debra White
Hello Val :)
I really enjoyed reading your haiku.
Lovely continuation through lines one into two and a wonderful satori line, which is both statement and clever wordplay.
Your words are descriptive, creating clear imagery and your subtle use of alliteration is a nice touch.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Hello Val :)
I really enjoyed reading your haiku.
Lovely continuation through lines one into two and a wonderful satori line, which is both statement and clever wordplay.
Your words are descriptive, creating clear imagery and your subtle use of alliteration is a nice touch.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Comment Written 11-May-2022
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Beautiful review, Debra
Comment from mermaids
Excellent haiku form and use of words that creates a picture of Monet's garden. "Quite the impression" is a perfect last line that sums up the first two lines.
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Excellent haiku form and use of words that creates a picture of Monet's garden. "Quite the impression" is a perfect last line that sums up the first two lines.
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Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you
