Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Excellent

Short, sweet and simple. Someone is coming home for a big payday. You have met all requirements and have been able to tell an entire story in that short little verse.

Well done.

 Comment Written 14-May-2022

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

Thanks for your review of my contest entry. I am pleased this short poem read like a story for you.

Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)

Excellent

Hello! You have definitely told a story with these few words. Great job! Brings back memories for me, growing up in a coastal town. I totally enjoyed it!

 Comment Written 14-May-2022

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

i enjoy the catch but never experienced the ride. Thanks for your review of my contest entry.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent one line poem for the contest.
It can be seen as a snapshot of time, or as a metaphor for life.
Hard work and steady hands lead to a full life.
Excellent picture to match words.
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Robert,

I like your analogy to life. Consider penning a poem along those lines (-;

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great story/poem in just one line. The picture you selected to accompany the piece fit well, too. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes.

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Thanks Jessi for your review and best wishes for this contest entry.