Ashes of Anger
Leaves you empty6 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Wow. This poem is one that I like to switch words & lines around to find different meanings. Does emptiness or anger cause pain that rages into fire. Or does anger and pain cause emptiness. Great choice of words.
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Wow. This poem is one that I like to switch words & lines around to find different meanings. Does emptiness or anger cause pain that rages into fire. Or does anger and pain cause emptiness. Great choice of words.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 20-May-2022
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Thank you
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It was fun
Comment from Pantygynt
Syllabically this is right on the button and the poem digs quite deeply into life's experiences resulting in a fine little philosophical gem just five lines in length.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Syllabically this is right on the button and the poem digs quite deeply into life's experiences resulting in a fine little philosophical gem just five lines in length.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
No pains, no gains, pains turn to raging fire, as when the heart is cut deep, as you feel, and you find, nothing but your anger remains, all go empty, feeling is intense, you gain nothing for anger remains; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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No pains, no gains, pains turn to raging fire, as when the heart is cut deep, as you feel, and you find, nothing but your anger remains, all go empty, feeling is intense, you gain nothing for anger remains; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you
Comment from leather
Your little doggy picture just stole my heart--what bliss.
Now to your 'Ashes of Anger' poem. It goes so well with the art work. Seems well-done.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Your little doggy picture just stole my heart--what bliss.
Now to your 'Ashes of Anger' poem. It goes so well with the art work. Seems well-done.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you - Yes, he is so very cute.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is formatted in an interesting way, Mia.
I enjoyed reading it. I like the image, the use of colored
font, and the great, and true, message. Great job with the
style of cinquain.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Your contest entry is formatted in an interesting way, Mia.
I enjoyed reading it. I like the image, the use of colored
font, and the great, and true, message. Great job with the
style of cinquain.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
I don't know much about cinquain poetry, but I did like your poem. I like the way you formatted and colored the words, too. It really emphasized your meaning. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I don't know much about cinquain poetry, but I did like your poem. I like the way you formatted and colored the words, too. It really emphasized your meaning. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you
