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Can't We

Why must we kill each other because of our differences?

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Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5 Line Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-May-2022


reply by the author on 10-May-2022
    Thank you for your kind teview of my poem. I'm hoping you have a good day as well.
Comment from Pantygynt
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I read into this that you answer your own question. Once the colour and beliefs are gone there seems to me to be little chance of happiness. Aren't they the very things that engender the happiness? And the pain.

 Comment Written 09-May-2022


reply by the author on 10-May-2022
    Thank you for your kind review of my poem, and you have it exactly correct. Without evil, there is no good.