Three of many gifts
Thank you for all these!10 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
What a shame I didn't read the entries in this contest before voting concluded - I would've voted for how you expressed these gifts and you would've come 2nd equal. Love, Joy, and Peace are essential for a worthwhile life.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
  |
What a shame I didn't read the entries in this contest before voting concluded - I would've voted for how you expressed these gifts and you would've come 2nd equal. Love, Joy, and Peace are essential for a worthwhile life.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
-
Thank you for your words of encouragement - I am glad you enjoyed it. I find it hard to understand what reviewers want?. I only just scraped in to third place tie. Lol.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Three beautiful things in life that everyone should have in their life. They can change your world in so many ways that the stories of how could go on forever.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
|
Three beautiful things in life that everyone should have in their life. They can change your world in so many ways that the stories of how could go on forever.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
-
So very true. Many thanks for your super review.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual 5-7-5, Three of Many Gifts, has the right setup and reminds the readers of the simplicity and importance of faith in God. Nice.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
|
This spiritual 5-7-5, Three of Many Gifts, has the right setup and reminds the readers of the simplicity and importance of faith in God. Nice.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
-
Thank you Bill. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from jaded831
Yes we are never really alone if we have faith. God lives within us all and He helps us believe in ourselves. Faith has brought me through many rough times. Your poem reminds us of how truly blessed we are.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
|
Yes we are never really alone if we have faith. God lives within us all and He helps us believe in ourselves. Faith has brought me through many rough times. Your poem reminds us of how truly blessed we are.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
-
Thank you very much. A lovely review, thoughtful, and appreciated.
Comment from Sarah Tummey
This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 faith contest. I'm glad for you that joy replaces fear. All the other lines, I could apply to myself too, but not that one. I have a real phobia of dogs, and any joy I've felt has never taken that away.
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
|
This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 faith contest. I'm glad for you that joy replaces fear. All the other lines, I could apply to myself too, but not that one. I have a real phobia of dogs, and any joy I've felt has never taken that away.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
-
Ah I understand. Sometimes that sort of fear remains but after you see a dog you can feel joy that he didn?t hurt you. Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. Appreciated.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The most precious and most reliable promises are in the Bible. If we belong to the Lord, we will--as your lovely poem says--have love, peace and joy. You have explained these so well.
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
|
The most precious and most reliable promises are in the Bible. If we belong to the Lord, we will--as your lovely poem says--have love, peace and joy. You have explained these so well.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
-
Thank you very much Janice. I appreciate your thoughtful words and encouragement.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Good job on your faith poem. It is spiritual. I like your poem. It is a good poem. I can understand reading it. Interesting. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
 |
I have enjoyed reading your poetry. Good job on your faith poem. It is spiritual. I like your poem. It is a good poem. I can understand reading it. Interesting. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Thanks Raul. As you gave four stars, do you have any suggestions for improvement?
-
It is good.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is very well-written and the artwork is perfect. I have had some very dark days in my life and am not sure how I survived. I'm still here so someone must have helped me through. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
|
This is very well-written and the artwork is perfect. I have had some very dark days in my life and am not sure how I survived. I'm still here so someone must have helped me through. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
I am sure He was helping you through. Thank you for your lovely review and good wishes. Always much appreciated.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Quite stirring in its beauty
of faith. A good contender
for the contest. My best
wishes for the competition.
Short poems can have strong
impact too. Blessings~
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
|
Quite stirring in its beauty
of faith. A good contender
for the contest. My best
wishes for the competition.
Short poems can have strong
impact too. Blessings~
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Thank you very much Regina. A lovely review, both positive and encouraging, much appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
These are three great spiritual gifts, and you've made them into a lovely poem. Your syllable count was perfect. You said quite a bit in 17 syllables. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
|
These are three great spiritual gifts, and you've made them into a lovely poem. Your syllable count was perfect. You said quite a bit in 17 syllables. Best wishes.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
-
Thank you very much Jessi for your lovely review and kind thoughts, and also good wishes.
