Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm going to read this as fiction per the General Fiction category. I guess lots of would-be relationships can happen online using Twitter and any other means. I had no idea that was the singer for the Mulan song. Thanks for sharing.
One comment:
It kinds of constrains (kind of) The subject is 'It' and the verb is 'constrains' so there's no need to conjugate 'kind of' which is acting more as an adverb.

 Comment Written 15-May-2022

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022

Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't mean to conjugate it. It's just a typo. Will change it asap.

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hey you!
You're right, he's a fabulous singer and easy on the eye.... but, as you know, for me, he has lost some of his appeal - Beauty is only skin deep and his arrogance spoils him...
Nice write :)
Best wishes always, Debra x

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

I have my ups and downs. He still has sweet moments. When I'm angry at him, a Spanish friend always tells me that he's not arrogant, but self-confident. Who knows?
Sending hugs,
MJ

reply by Debra White on 14-May-2022

It's a fine line! ;) x

reply by the author on 14-May-2022

True. But I'd love to be self confident.

reply by Debra White on 14-May-2022

Same here ;) x

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

I like your flash fiction, and I agree that Twitter is restrictive. It has added more characters since I became a member of their service. You did a great job. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 07-May-2022

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reply by the author on 08-May-2022

Thanks for reading, Shirley. I didn't use Twitter before, so I didn't know about the number of characters

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

A Tweet and a Half
by Heather Knight

Hello, Heather, I am a little confused about your flash nonfiction. I think you are saying that you met a man online while married to your husband and that your husband is okay with it? No judgment, if you have an open marriage (platonic or not) is okay but I would add a sentence or two to explain more clearly.

 Comment Written 07-May-2022

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reply by the author on 08-May-2022

Hi,
Have you read the notes or watched the video?
It doesn't make sense otherwise.
The guy is Dan Vasc, a heavy metal singer, who comes from Brazil, but sings in English.
I promise you it's worth a listen.

reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 08-May-2022

I had read your author notes but I didn't watch the video. He is very handsome. I love men with long hair. He seems an interesting person to befriend.

reply by the author on 14-May-2022

I also like men with long hair and this guy has a voice to die for.
Anyway, my bad if the ending wasn't clear. I love writing stories that are a bit of a puzzle.