A Vignette in Poetry Form
A little momma is asking other momma a question10 total reviews
Comment from Melbelles
What a creative poem!! I didn't expect the end. Well done. I believe a good poem is one where it's like you're on boat and you don't know what to expect from the currents and crashing waves, making it an unexpected adventure. :) Thank you for this. May your pen continue to be blessed.
-Melbelles
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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What a creative poem!! I didn't expect the end. Well done. I believe a good poem is one where it's like you're on boat and you don't know what to expect from the currents and crashing waves, making it an unexpected adventure. :) Thank you for this. May your pen continue to be blessed.
-Melbelles
Comment Written 06-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Wow, What a lovely & thorough review.
Comment from Marienkiefer
Very endearing poem, children will gravitate to and parents would love to read, ad-libbing their own sound effects mind you, along with your well-crafted piece. I can hear childrens laughter to the comedy and adventure built into your writing.
Great characters in your poem, playful. Lovely movement, dialogue and action. Sparkling contrasts like: skinny tongue vs. wide-mouthed frogs. Very delightful read. Loved it, loved it.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Very endearing poem, children will gravitate to and parents would love to read, ad-libbing their own sound effects mind you, along with your well-crafted piece. I can hear childrens laughter to the comedy and adventure built into your writing.
Great characters in your poem, playful. Lovely movement, dialogue and action. Sparkling contrasts like: skinny tongue vs. wide-mouthed frogs. Very delightful read. Loved it, loved it.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2022
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed it so.
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha ha...I just loved this too much!!
Love the pictures, and the poem, but the ending,
that's just priceless.
Gave me a good chuckle!!
Wonderful,
blessings...
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Ha ha ha...I just loved this too much!!
Love the pictures, and the poem, but the ending,
that's just priceless.
Gave me a good chuckle!!
Wonderful,
blessings...
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Thank you for you amusing review. It's wonder to tell with the facial expression.
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Have a nice week!!
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a really cute poem for Mother's Day, Liz. I like the picture that goes with it too. I'm glad mother frog got away from that snake! Well done..
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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This is a really cute poem for Mother's Day, Liz. I like the picture that goes with it too. I'm glad mother frog got away from that snake! Well done..
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank youfornyour delightful review. One of my friends loved to tell it back in the 70's. When you ask the question you say it as wide-mouthed as possible & at the end, you make your mouth as tiny as possible. Kids love the antics.
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You're most welcome, Liz. I can see that children would really enjoy this. :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a very sweet picture and an interesting poem as the wide-mouthed frog takes her survey. It's a good thing she pursed her lips. No more wide mouth. Very smart frog.
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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This is a very sweet picture and an interesting poem as the wide-mouthed frog takes her survey. It's a good thing she pursed her lips. No more wide mouth. Very smart frog.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This made me smile. When we were young we used to have a joke, where to the one who said he ate wide-mouthed frogs, she pursed her lips and said "ooh, you don't see many of those around these days, do you?"
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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This made me smile. When we were young we used to have a joke, where to the one who said he ate wide-mouthed frogs, she pursed her lips and said "ooh, you don't see many of those around these days, do you?"
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Yes, this is a shortened version of the one you are referring to. I'd forgotten the whole response you have remembered. My excuse is it was back in the 70's, about 49 years ago. lol
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Bravo for the little frog mother, Liz.
I enjoyed reading your club poem.
I like the inquisitiveness of the mother
frog. In the end, she is smart like all
mothers and protects and cares for
her family. I like your fun approach
to the prompt.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Bravo for the little frog mother, Liz.
I enjoyed reading your club poem.
I like the inquisitiveness of the mother
frog. In the end, she is smart like all
mothers and protects and cares for
her family. I like your fun approach
to the prompt.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you for your sweet review. I'm glad you enjoyed it
Comment from aryr
This was truly inspiring, Liz. I really enjoyed the picture of all the mamas and their little ones, it was so delightful. It was rather inspiring that she approached each mama to determine what the little ones ate. Until the last, from which she wisely chose to flee and feed her little ones.
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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This was truly inspiring, Liz. I really enjoyed the picture of all the mamas and their little ones, it was so delightful. It was rather inspiring that she approached each mama to determine what the little ones ate. Until the last, from which she wisely chose to flee and feed her little ones.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you for your delightful review. *******Wonderful news
Anne hopes to be back on FS on Tue. She shared a new adventure of Mugs...fun
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You are so welcome, Liz. Gosh darn, I will be away from Wednesday morning until Sunday night or early Monday morning for a trip to Atlanta, Georgia but I will watch for it.
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cool
Comment from karenina
OH my gosh!
""Ooooh thet's noice."
Talk about a survival instinct! I'm grinning ear to ear...which is perfectly fine as I'm not a wide-mouth frog and there is no mommy snake lingering!
Too clever! My husband us grinning!
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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OH my gosh!
""Ooooh thet's noice."
Talk about a survival instinct! I'm grinning ear to ear...which is perfectly fine as I'm not a wide-mouth frog and there is no mommy snake lingering!
Too clever! My husband us grinning!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you for your delightful review. I'm so glad both of you enjoyed it.
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Ed loves humor... And me trying to smush my mouth up and say it just so--well, that was a moment!
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***big grin***
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! That is a clever take on the picture! We forget that some of these momma animals are ones that feed on the other momma animals. Good that the frog momma knew when to skedaddle out of there!
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Lol! That is a clever take on the picture! We forget that some of these momma animals are ones that feed on the other momma animals. Good that the frog momma knew when to skedaddle out of there!
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you for your amusing review. Lol...yes, your comments are so true.
