What Should Be Known
a 5-7-5-7-7 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
This stood out because I've never seen anyone write a Tanka that tells a story before. I also liked the last line about her ex's new wife concealing her scars. He may have left what he deemed a stale marriage for something more enticing, but longevity means making allowances for another's imperfections. That's what your last line said to me.
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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This stood out because I've never seen anyone write a Tanka that tells a story before. I also liked the last line about her ex's new wife concealing her scars. He may have left what he deemed a stale marriage for something more enticing, but longevity means making allowances for another's imperfections. That's what your last line said to me.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Good afternoon,
This is an interesting and well-written 5-7-5-7-7 poem, which is also important in topic. Thank you for sharing it here on FanStory.
All the best,
Erika
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Good afternoon,
This is an interesting and well-written 5-7-5-7-7 poem, which is also important in topic. Thank you for sharing it here on FanStory.
All the best,
Erika
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
