Oh Wait
Love is what you make it.3 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Given 4 stars because this made me laugh, but does it deserve to be in a romance contest? Sounds more cynical than romantic to me! Well done for the 5-7-5 though.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Given 4 stars because this made me laugh, but does it deserve to be in a romance contest? Sounds more cynical than romantic to me! Well done for the 5-7-5 though.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you for reviewing my poetry.
Comment from tfawcus
A poignant verse. There are disadvantages to being the heir to a fortune. One never knows whether suitors are smitten by you or your riches. The world is full of gold diggers.
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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A poignant verse. There are disadvantages to being the heir to a fortune. One never knows whether suitors are smitten by you or your riches. The world is full of gold diggers.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you for your generous review. And, you are so right. 'The world is full of gold diggers.'
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
The sad truth is that this is true in a lot of modern day relationships. I am sorry if this is something you have been a victim of. This however does not follow the 5-7-5 structure. Thank you for sharing though.
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Hello!
The sad truth is that this is true in a lot of modern day relationships. I am sorry if this is something you have been a victim of. This however does not follow the 5-7-5 structure. Thank you for sharing though.
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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I appreciate your review, but please tell me why it does not follow the 5-7-5 structure.
