Jennifer
A neighborhood's attitude makes a young girl vulnerable2 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Adanmole a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. Let me start by saying welcome to FanStory and congrats on your first post. I liked your Flash fiction contest entry it was well written and kept me engaged. Good job and good luck!
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Hello Adanmole a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. Let me start by saying welcome to FanStory and congrats on your first post. I liked your Flash fiction contest entry it was well written and kept me engaged. Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 03-May-2022
Comment from R. Marc Goodson
This was a great flash fiction read. I could easily picture the girl, the environment she was in, and the writer's intent in getting both feeling and description across to the reader. You did both successfully. I look forward to other offerings from you.
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This was a great flash fiction read. I could easily picture the girl, the environment she was in, and the writer's intent in getting both feeling and description across to the reader. You did both successfully. I look forward to other offerings from you.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
