Julie
Celebration53 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Julie
by Janet Foor
Congratulations to your daughter! A masters degree is a big deal. You sound like a proud in your beautifully written poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Julie
by Janet Foor
Congratulations to your daughter! A masters degree is a big deal. You sound like a proud in your beautifully written poem. Well done!
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for your thoughtful and kind review. We are so very proud of her.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful poem to pay tribute to your amazing daughter. She sounds like quite the woman. Congratulations on being Recognized and All Time Best.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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This was a beautiful poem to pay tribute to your amazing daughter. She sounds like quite the woman. Congratulations on being Recognized and All Time Best.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for your thoughtful and kind review. We are so very proud of her. She is an amazing young woman.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this amazing woman with us in this contest entry. And even more special, she's your daughter. We don't hear enough about amazing women. I, too, am a mother of boys, four. I understand what it takes to accomplish everything she has. She's in my prayers. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing this amazing woman with us in this contest entry. And even more special, she's your daughter. We don't hear enough about amazing women. I, too, am a mother of boys, four. I understand what it takes to accomplish everything she has. She's in my prayers. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you Barbara for your thoughtful and kind review. We are so very proud of her.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from KJ
What a sweet homage to a daughter. Any mother with a growing daughter can appreciate the sentiments behind this poem. I'm sure Julie finds it very moving to read. I can absolutely sense the pride of the author and the devotion to her child.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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What a sweet homage to a daughter. Any mother with a growing daughter can appreciate the sentiments behind this poem. I'm sure Julie finds it very moving to read. I can absolutely sense the pride of the author and the devotion to her child.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you KJ for your thoughtful and kind review. We are so very proud of her.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Inky Cat
I love this. It paints a picture of a vibrant young girl turned young woman, through the eyes of a loving mom. I could really 'see' her. Plus I love the rhythm of the poem and rhyming structure - it works so well!
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I love this. It paints a picture of a vibrant young girl turned young woman, through the eyes of a loving mom. I could really 'see' her. Plus I love the rhythm of the poem and rhyming structure - it works so well!
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging thoughtful and kind review and for the special sixth star. We are so very proud of her and all she has accomplished.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Teri7
Janet, This is a very beautiful and well written rhyming poem about your lovely daughter and her accomplishments and what she means to you. You used very good descriptive and very loving words. You have a reason to be proud of her. Happy Mothers Day Sunday my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Janet, This is a very beautiful and well written rhyming poem about your lovely daughter and her accomplishments and what she means to you. You used very good descriptive and very loving words. You have a reason to be proud of her. Happy Mothers Day Sunday my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you Teri for your thoughtful and kind review. We are so very proud of her. It was a joy to watch he receive her Master's Degree.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
A lovely celebration of your daughter. She is described so well by her contradictions and accomplishments. You are indeed a lucky mom. I wonder only about the word "forged".... did you mean "forded" ?
forged = copied fraudulently; fake. OR to create with a lot of hard work, hoping that it will be strong or lasting (like forged steel).
forded = The act of crossing a shallow place in a body of water, such as a river, where one can cross by walking or riding on an animal or in a vehicle.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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A lovely celebration of your daughter. She is described so well by her contradictions and accomplishments. You are indeed a lucky mom. I wonder only about the word "forged".... did you mean "forded" ?
forged = copied fraudulently; fake. OR to create with a lot of hard work, hoping that it will be strong or lasting (like forged steel).
forded = The act of crossing a shallow place in a body of water, such as a river, where one can cross by walking or riding on an animal or in a vehicle.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you K for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I hear you with the word "forged" and I understand your point. However, I was going with the definition of forge as a verb.
1. To advance gradually but steadily: forged ahead through throngs of shoppers.
2. To advance with an abrupt increase of speed: forged into first place with seconds to go.
I considered changing the word to avoid any confusion but I really like the visual of Julie forging ahead and sometimes going against the odds.
Hope all this makes sense.
Blessings and have a good afternoon.
Janet
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Yes, I forgot about this other way of using forged (as in forged ahead).
Comment from nomi338
It is always a joy when someone else celebrates the accomplishments of our children. But I daresay that when we do it in the way that only a proud and loving parent can. It means so much more. The love a parent has and displays to their child is a gift more precious than silver or gold. Ask any child that grew up without it, and you will find that a large and important piece of their life is sadly missing. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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It is always a joy when someone else celebrates the accomplishments of our children. But I daresay that when we do it in the way that only a proud and loving parent can. It means so much more. The love a parent has and displays to their child is a gift more precious than silver or gold. Ask any child that grew up without it, and you will find that a large and important piece of their life is sadly missing. Congratulations.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you nomi for your thoughtful and kind review. We are so very proud of her.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jennifer Keeley
Beautiful poem. It was more than a rhyming poem- it had a story or milestone in each stanza. It was meaningful and of course, your picture made it real. This was special and clearly written from the heart. Very nice job!
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Beautiful poem. It was more than a rhyming poem- it had a story or milestone in each stanza. It was meaningful and of course, your picture made it real. This was special and clearly written from the heart. Very nice job!
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you Jennifer for your thoughtful and kind review. We are so very proud of her.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is such a beautiful, moving poem--a great tribute to your daughter,
through the use of specific details. Your poem is also very skillfully written. Our children become even more precious when they give us grandkids!
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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This is such a beautiful, moving poem--a great tribute to your daughter,
through the use of specific details. Your poem is also very skillfully written. Our children become even more precious when they give us grandkids!
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 15-May-2022
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Thank you Janice for your thoughtful and kind review. We are so very proud of her and her sons have been her joy as well as ours.
Blessings
Janet
