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Bad habit can sometimes be enjoyed.
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Comment from
Willie P. Smith
I certainly hope that what he has on the end of that finger didn't come from the part of his face just above his mouth. There's nothing more gross than a bugger eater, UGGGG. I'm out of sixes. Willie
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
Well, yes. You got it. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from
LisaD123
An excellent entry and it is a perfect lowku. The repetition of -s- adds to the gruesomeness of the images created, which reaches its peak in the last two words. Thanks for sharing such horror (!), and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
Thank you for reading and providing feedback. I know it is not pleasant to read.
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