Priceless Poo Picture
Lowku Entry11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This lowku 5-7-5, Priceless Poo Picture, has the proper formatting and suggests that some kids have great imaginations and can beat everyone else in a bathroom decorating contest with a win-from-behind tactic.
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This lowku 5-7-5, Priceless Poo Picture, has the proper formatting and suggests that some kids have great imaginations and can beat everyone else in a bathroom decorating contest with a win-from-behind tactic.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
If they go in their diaper this kind of awful painting will happen if they slide off their diaper and don't get attention right away. it is no fun to clean up either.
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If they go in their diaper this kind of awful painting will happen if they slide off their diaper and don't get attention right away. it is no fun to clean up either.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I will tell you this is so true. My nephew as a toddler would "paint " is walls by emptying his diaper.
The wall point had sand in it and was difficult to clean. Thank you for the smile
Best wishes
Mary
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I will tell you this is so true. My nephew as a toddler would "paint " is walls by emptying his diaper.
The wall point had sand in it and was difficult to clean. Thank you for the smile
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is awful! I have never heard of this style of poem and your unusual sentiment here is something I've never known a child do before either, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness this is awful! I have never heard of this style of poem and your unusual sentiment here is something I've never known a child do before either, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is truly gross.............. but is written tastefully and skillfully. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest. I hope you do well.
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This is truly gross.............. but is written tastefully and skillfully. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest. I hope you do well.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the Lowku Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice. You followed the contest rules well, but for your own information, lowku poems are 7/5/7.
I don't love the last line.
Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Good entry for the Lowku Poem writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is nice. You followed the contest rules well, but for your own information, lowku poems are 7/5/7.
I don't love the last line.
Goodluck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
A very realistic picture of the imagination and abandonment of a child. I personally experienced this with one of my children, when potty training. Thanks for sharing.
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A very realistic picture of the imagination and abandonment of a child. I personally experienced this with one of my children, when potty training. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from LisaD123
A perfect lowku poem!!! The image is perfect and works perfectly with the words. I like the way that the grossness is hinted at and it's up to the reader's mind to take it to the next level! Thanks for sharing.
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A perfect lowku poem!!! The image is perfect and works perfectly with the words. I like the way that the grossness is hinted at and it's up to the reader's mind to take it to the next level! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Janilou
Well, I must say that isn't what I was expecting. LOL Children are very resourceful after all. A smelly painting that would be and what a clean up job.
Nice artwork to accompany your short poem.
All the best,
Jan
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Well, I must say that isn't what I was expecting. LOL Children are very resourceful after all. A smelly painting that would be and what a clean up job.
Nice artwork to accompany your short poem.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from jessizero
The poem met the requirements of the Lowku. It has the correct syllable count and deals with something very disgusting. The picture makes it come to life in a horrible way. Good job. :)
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The poem met the requirements of the Lowku. It has the correct syllable count and deals with something very disgusting. The picture makes it come to life in a horrible way. Good job. :)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
