Describing Jesus
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Aftermath - The Gathering"What happens when the Lord visits a young man.
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Comment from BethShelby
This is good story. This school psychologist is in the wrong district. He isn't going to get much support in the middle of the Bible Belt. It seems everyone is blaming him for the boy running away and they should.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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This is good story. This school psychologist is in the wrong district. He isn't going to get much support in the middle of the Bible Belt. It seems everyone is blaming him for the boy running away and they should.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Julie G1
Well done. This chapter builds to an intriguing lead to what happens next. The writer used an apt and effective choice of language and imagery. Keep on writing, looking forward to the rest of the plot unfolding.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Well done. This chapter builds to an intriguing lead to what happens next. The writer used an apt and effective choice of language and imagery. Keep on writing, looking forward to the rest of the plot unfolding.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Hi, Julie. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
