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Describing Jesus

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What happens when the Lord visits a young man.

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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This is how to start of the day with something that will follow me along throughout the rest of my afternoon and evening, and maybe even the night to come. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Hio, Ric. Thank you for your kind words!

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Tatiana Cartayas
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Wow! This was absolutely amazing . Your mind and the way it works is unexplainable . Round of applause to you for this seriously. Was your writing inspired by something or this was just out of nowhere! I am dying to know because it seems so left field kind of like my writing

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Hello, my friend. I get a title in my head and then run with it. Thank you for your kind words!

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from JT traveller
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Mike, a wonderful read today. Full of emotional elements and classic responses that we see in society today such as, "If I haven't seen it/done it, then it doesn't exist."

Your writing flows and engages the reader, leaving us wanting more and wondering what will happen next. America seems different to Australia. A psychologist having the power to make such a diagnosis rather than a psychiatrist?

Keep going. I am looking forward to the next instalment. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Hi, Jacqueline. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story. I was wondering about that point.

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a story of a child at the mercy of adults who have to faith in God and want to stamp him from every child's memory. The schools are afraid ov being sued by the ACLU if God is ever mentioned. I anxious to see where this story is heading.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from country ranch writer
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I reviewed this didn't show up here we go again.
Mr. Is a jerk he has no compassion at all.
Mr, Philips only wants to make a name for himself
God needs to show them the error of their ways!
Crystal is 100 percent correct .
3-16-2023.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from royowen
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You've written a brilliant story about the possibility of what can happen to a little boy who lives in a world that's lost its hope and its way. His poor mum, and Crystal are on his side, but he's run away, seeing no alternative to his problem, thinking they'll. put him in an asylum, beautifully written Mike, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
    Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
reply by royowen on 20-Mar-2023
    You too