The Center of the Universe
Even a safe place is horrifying with the right story.8 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Supernatural happening sometimes appears non-supernatural or real or something else we do not explain or word, yes, the centre of the universe is there, believe it or not, your words do vibrate and the entire universe can hear; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Supernatural happening sometimes appears non-supernatural or real or something else we do not explain or word, yes, the centre of the universe is there, believe it or not, your words do vibrate and the entire universe can hear; well said, well done; post god speed more; positively encouraging editing, negatively not wording, forgiving errors of theist-good authors-writers. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Your sister was brave enough to try and save you no matter what. At the moment, she did not back away, she was ready to face the unknown. To save her brother, she had your back. I enjoyed your story. True or not. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Your sister was brave enough to try and save you no matter what. At the moment, she did not back away, she was ready to face the unknown. To save her brother, she had your back. I enjoyed your story. True or not. Have a great day.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating
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You are welcome.
Comment from F. William Lester
Well done. Shame on big brothers for scaring little sisters. :) Not that I'd ever done that to my sister. I liked the way you pulled the story together and set them up, especially the dramatic effect of shaking and feigning your abduction. Well done. Good luck and stay well.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Well done. Shame on big brothers for scaring little sisters. :) Not that I'd ever done that to my sister. I liked the way you pulled the story together and set them up, especially the dramatic effect of shaking and feigning your abduction. Well done. Good luck and stay well.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
You made visiting an interesting place into an adventure! A delightful story A story the boys will remember for a long time, the trip that an uncle took them to The Center of the Universe.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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You made visiting an interesting place into an adventure! A delightful story A story the boys will remember for a long time, the trip that an uncle took them to The Center of the Universe.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very fun. Your sister, if she reads this, may not think so. You obviously were a good actor, as I am going to believe you fooled her. I didn't believe you would be abducted, however.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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This is very fun. Your sister, if she reads this, may not think so. You obviously were a good actor, as I am going to believe you fooled her. I didn't believe you would be abducted, however.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from BethShelby
If someone actually thought they might vanish into who know where is the did do the circle just right, they probably would be afraid to stand there. I can imagine some pretending there were about to be pulled away. There is circle Continual Park in Nashville that you hear strange sound when you talk or stomp you feet. People outside the circle can't hear it. Nicely written flash that meet the criteria for the contes
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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If someone actually thought they might vanish into who know where is the did do the circle just right, they probably would be afraid to stand there. I can imagine some pretending there were about to be pulled away. There is circle Continual Park in Nashville that you hear strange sound when you talk or stomp you feet. People outside the circle can't hear it. Nicely written flash that meet the criteria for the contes
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Good entry for the contest. Sounds like you like to play tricks on your sister and apparently you know she will believe whatever you tell her. That sounds like an interesting place to visit. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Good entry for the contest. Sounds like you like to play tricks on your sister and apparently you know she will believe whatever you tell her. That sounds like an interesting place to visit. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
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You are welcome
Comment from jessizero
This was a great story! That was a mean prank to play on your sister, though. I don't blame them for being afraid. Thanks for sharing this here. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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This was a great story! That was a mean prank to play on your sister, though. I don't blame them for being afraid. Thanks for sharing this here. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and generous rating.
