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Here is How a Cloud Grows

A cloud is a flower from many seeds

13 total reviews 
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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This is well written and well presented.
You did a good job with the prompt.
This is a god contest entry and should do very well.
The message is a good one that I hope your readers will see. Encouragement for our kids is truly important.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    Thanks
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    Thanks
Comment from sandra roth
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This was a very informative and educational piece. I think children (as well as adults) will enjoy it and find it easy to follow and understand, maybe even perk their interest to learn more about clouds. I loved how you mixed science with real life examples that can be understood and used to formulate new ideas. This was a great piece of educational writing that I think would inspire anyone. not cluttered, every word served a purpose.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    Very nice of you to say. Thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    Very nice of you to say. Thank you.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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As an adult, taking adult education classes to receive my High School diploma, I needed credits to earn, along with my GED diploma and college credits. I took several science classes. I was amazed to learn clouds had names. I was so excited. I love science. And yes, this will be an awesome lesson for children and adults. I enjoyed your awareness story.

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
    and thanks for reading and commenting. I love to be talked about even apserively. jk'g
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 23-Apr-2022
    You are welcome.