I Find Bananas So Ahhh-Peeling
Ode to Bananas - long overdue - worth a pun or two3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
"And now I rhyme bananas for you?" seemingly, you do and do it well, and dollars to donuts if we spoke face-to-face I'd smell bananas on your breath. Fascinating subject to write about but whom am I to question " Paradoxically Speaking." (It will be my next release, later today, likely not attached to a contest.)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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"And now I rhyme bananas for you?" seemingly, you do and do it well, and dollars to donuts if we spoke face-to-face I'd smell bananas on your breath. Fascinating subject to write about but whom am I to question " Paradoxically Speaking." (It will be my next release, later today, likely not attached to a contest.)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Might be one of those bourbon bananas you've heard about. Indeed, I woke up yesterday never thinking I would right about bananas, but when inspiration hits, there is no ahh-peel. Thanks for reading my creation and checking in.
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My pleasure. Write me more.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your ode to banana contest entry, you executed it well with nice rhymes and flow. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your ode to banana contest entry, you executed it well with nice rhymes and flow. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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How did you come by the13thpoet name? That is curious. Anyway, thanks for checking in on my banana nut half-baked attempt at poetry.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the protagonist's love for bananas.
The work highlights the many delicacies he or she is attuned to with bananas.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of rhymes and imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the protagonist's love for bananas.
The work highlights the many delicacies he or she is attuned to with bananas.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of rhymes and imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reading and relating your views
Albeit with words I never use.
Some I do not even know.
But, I certainly smile at "Bravo"! Thanks!
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Remain .Blessed.
