Comment from Bridge

Excellent

A very good story. I loved the twist at the end. The ending is the best part of the story. I had to read it twice but very well done. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review. Hope the story was just as enjoyable the second time through

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

Well, this is a complete story. It matches and conforms to the rules of the contest perfectly. Another person just basically said it couldn't be done in only 80 words, yet here it is. Hats off to you for your writing skill.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review and the six

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, very good, very cute. Your writing quickly pulls the reader into the story and keeps their attention to the very end. I especially liked the surprise that you got when you answered the door. Well-chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review. I hope to be the surpriser later on this year.