Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was adorable. I like the rhymes, and the wordplay on apple. The picture you selected here was so funny - it really brought the poem to life. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I liked the play on words here and I don't think I have ever tastes peach pie, but it sounds delightful as I love peaches. My mouth is watering at the thought here, a fine well rhymed poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022

Try it with vanilla ice cream! It's amazing. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

This is a great poem describing a dessert. And the peach is cute. I like the "Apple of my eye." statement. You have a sharp mind. Thank you for sharing this sweet treat. Have a great Easter, and maybe with a great piece of pie.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022

Thank you for reading my poem and I hope you and your family have a wonderful Easter. :)

reply by Carolyn Dooley on 16-Apr-2022

You are welcome. And thank you. Have a great Easter.

Comment from Heather Burroughs

Excellent

This is a great 5-7-5. Dessert is my weakness! Give me any kind of pie lol
Good luck with your entry in the upcoming contest.
Many blessings to you

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022

I love pie too...my favorite you can guess! Thanks so much for this great review. :)

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

Loved it ! A very sweet ( pun intended) poem indeed. Very well written. Very creatively done. All the best to you in the contest......
With regards

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022

Thank you for this nice review. Have a wonderful evening. :)