Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

CONGRADULATIONSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SHANAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU DID IT! You made it through a journey that only ends in celebration and warmth!!! I'm so happy for YOUUUUUU!

And I love this chapter... I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT BABIES HAVE ALWAYS HAD A SPELL OVER ME! Ending with a newborn and a new life is always the way to go... babies are EVERYTHING. And it's nice to see that Drakon (big, scary, mohawked guy,) has a beautiful baby girl...(I know realistically Ella wouldn't have opened her eyes that soon BUT WHO CARES? THIS IS A BREEDLINE BABY! THEY DOPE LIKE THAT;)

Anyway, I'll be looking to get a book from you soon... Excuse me A SIGNED COPY. ;) ;) I'm so happy for you and YOU should celebrate... don't worry I'll be celebrating for you virtually LOL.


YOU'RE AWESOME SHANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! ;) ;)

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thank you so much, AJ :)
I am so thrilled this book is complete. Next week, it will go off to the editor.
And yes, new babies are so sweet. My son opened his eyes right after he was born, so it's not unusual.
So happy you enjoyed this and supported me along the way. It makes a difference when someone really cares. It gives me inspiration.

Thanks again!
Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 12-Apr-2022

YOU'RE SOOOOOOO WELCOME SHANA!

Oh, okay... I'm sure he was ADORABLE!

Yes! Supporting other writers is what I DO! 😍😘

Comment from dellsworthpoet

Excellent

A very touching scene handled with warmth and caring. The flow is good. The dialogue is believable. The images are crisp.

Suggestion:

The two ladies had already changed out of their evening gowns and was wearing scrubs.
You changed tenses in the middle to this sentence it should be were wearing scrubs.

Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thanks so much, dellsworthpoet :)
I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks for the helpful advice. I appreciate your generous stars and encouraging words.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by dellsworthpoet on 11-Apr-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

What a beautifully written short episode, Drakon could have been me when my elder daughter was born, although I likewise adore my younger daughter, the first one awakens that wonder contained within. That dam bursts with gratitude for the first one born, beautifully written Shana, this is is fantastic, and congrats, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thanks so much, my dear friend :)
So glad you enjoyed the new baby episode. Big ol' Drakon is really a softy. LOL! Babies are the best gift!
I appreciate all your support over the years. Not sure when I will be writing here. I have to revise my first two books, but I will still checkout your lovely poems.

Thanks again!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 11-Apr-2022

Thank you dear girl, good luck

Comment from Shirley McLain

Exceptional

This is a beautiful ending to a great story. Congratulations on finishing your work. I will be looking forward to the start of your seventh book. Enjoy the rest of your Sunday. Shirley

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022

Thanks so much, Shirley :)
I'm happy you enjoyed the ending. I do love new babies. They are the best gifts.
I will be revising my first two books, so it may be a while before I post here. I have really appreciated all your generous stars and kind words. You have made a difference. Your words of encouragement inspire my writing.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)