Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Surrender"Illustrated poems
5 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
I don't know what happened here but there is a lot of gray between the poem and the comment section here. It is a nicely written poem and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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I don't know what happened here but there is a lot of gray between the poem and the comment section here. It is a nicely written poem and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thanks?So glad you enjoyed it. There is way too much grey?I?m trying to fix it, but no luck so far. Thanks again for reading this and for your nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Simple sensual words here to create a loving moment in your 2-4-2 poem, I wish you luck with the contest, there is much satisfaction in a loving connection, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Simple sensual words here to create a loving moment in your 2-4-2 poem, I wish you luck with the contest, there is much satisfaction in a loving connection, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Dolly, thanks for your kind review. That?s exactly the mood that I was trying to create. So glad you like the poem.
Comment from jaded831
Great entry, you created a feeling out of words. Great theme, love is universal. In love one does feel helpless and can't help but to surrender. Together with the picture you make a wonderful presentation.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Great entry, you created a feeling out of words. Great theme, love is universal. In love one does feel helpless and can't help but to surrender. Together with the picture you make a wonderful presentation.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. So glad you like the poem. I love to write about feelings as well as nature.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Jane Jane a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 2-4-2 Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Hello Jane Jane a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 2-4-2 Poem contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thanks so much?Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I like the picture developed with the black and white film of a beautiful woman. It reminds me of old pictures and the women who played in western and romantic films. Those were the days when acting was fantastic. With much meaning. Thank you for such a great short story with a huge meaning.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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I like the picture developed with the black and white film of a beautiful woman. It reminds me of old pictures and the women who played in western and romantic films. Those were the days when acting was fantastic. With much meaning. Thank you for such a great short story with a huge meaning.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thanks for reading and for your nice review. It is a lot of fun to match pictures and words.
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You are welcome. And I enjoy watching the old black and white films, they have much meaning.
