Comment from royowen

Exceptional

As always your versatility shines through, you are not only good at battle scenes which is unique within itself, but your good at the more sentimental scenes and the way you believe collective relationships should be, and I agree with you, there's enough of the romantic in me to be deeply moved by this elegant chapter, well done Shana, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022

Ah, thanks Roy :)
I think happy scenes are definitely easier for me to write than battle scenes. Now, I just need to bring Drakon and Cassie's new baby into the world. :)
Thanks for your positive feedback and support. You're so helpful and gracious.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 05-Apr-2022

Bless you Shana

Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

SO MANY HAPPY COUPLES AND SO MANY BABIESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

Shana, you really outdid yourself with this chapter! From simply describing Roman and Lailah's kiss and walk down the aisle, to the other Breedline members and couples and Cassie's water breaking I'M IN LOVE!!!

My stomach gave a little jump when I saw the last line and the TO BE CONTINUED... CAUSE I THOUGHT YOU WERE DONEEEEE!

But don't worry I'm not mad LOL. I can't wait to see what happens next. And even though I didn't read every chapter of this particular book, this chapter alone helped me understand what I missed. AND I KNEW RYAN WAS BREEDLINE! That's the only reason he had those EXTRA LARGE clothes on hand... LOL. I know my werewolves.

Thanks so much for writing chapters like these Shana! You'll see me soon the next time you post. ;)

SIX STARSSSS!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022

Thanks so much, AJ :)
The wedding and family gathering was enjoyable to write. So thrilled you enjoyed. Now all I have to do is bring Drakon and Cassie's baby into the world and I'm done with this book. YAY! I'm ready to move on.

Thanks again my friend!
Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 05-Apr-2022

AWESOME!!! Ending it with a baby is always the way to go... then it's onto... VAMPIRES IN MANHATTEN...

LOL. I'm ready too ;)

reply by AJ McCall on 05-Apr-2022

And you're welcome!

I almost forgot to say it... ;) LOL.

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022

I love new babies in stories too! Before I start another book, I will be taking a break and revising my first two books. My next book will be Living Nightmares and then the next in line (#8) will be called Vampirism in Manhattan.

reply by AJ McCall on 07-Apr-2022

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! LET'S GOOOOOOOO!

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

A nice descriptive reading chapter. It had a lot of detail and will walk us further into the story. I like the descriptions of the dresses. You did a great job. Have a wonderful day. Shirley

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022

Thank you so much, Shirley :) I appreciate your kind feedback and support. I did add a few things after the bridesmaids come into the scene. I thought it would be nice to mention more guests and their kiddos. I'm getting closer to finishing this book. YAY!

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is an interesting story. I read several of the previous chapters and this addition doesn't disappoint. I look forward to reading more of the story and find out where you are eventually going with this. Nice work.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022

Thank so much, prettybluebirds :) It's good to hear from you again. This one is getting close to ending. Maybe a chapter or two left. It's definitely been fun writing.

Thanks again for your positive feedback. I appreciate it!
Sincerely,
Shana :)