Imagination's Offspring
Dreams of the waking kind12 total reviews
Comment from JanPerry
These are daydreams. "one spark can set you on a path (,)no comma, you may find(.) and a full stop is needed here. In the last line put..." is (to) believe in yourself, carry on without fear." Adding "to" will make it correct English. Thanks for your daydreams.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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These are daydreams. "one spark can set you on a path (,)no comma, you may find(.) and a full stop is needed here. In the last line put..." is (to) believe in yourself, carry on without fear." Adding "to" will make it correct English. Thanks for your daydreams.
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed this dream-filled poem. You give a lot of details about dreams and what they can offer us and I like the imagery.
A dream is the child of imagination,- great line to start off with.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed this dream-filled poem. You give a lot of details about dreams and what they can offer us and I like the imagery.
A dream is the child of imagination,- great line to start off with.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this encouraging review...you have a great day as well. :)
