Romolo and Remo
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You've done a good job of breaking down the story, as presented in your author's notes, into 4 lines and meeting the requirements of the contest in doing so. Nice job, and good luck with this.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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You've done a good job of breaking down the story, as presented in your author's notes, into 4 lines and meeting the requirements of the contest in doing so. Nice job, and good luck with this.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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I chose that part because it depicts the scene in the artwork..
I wrote the poem about a year ago and I felt not many would like it anyways , so I finally went with the reduced version.
I love sculpture..
Thank you for reviewing my work.
Keep safe!
Comment from oliver818
You describe the myth of Romulus and Remus very well here. I like the words you chose liked snuggled and suckled. The repeated vowel sound works really well. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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You describe the myth of Romulus and Remus very well here. I like the words you chose liked snuggled and suckled. The repeated vowel sound works really well. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading my wee poem, glad you enjoyed it , I hope you read also the entire poem below in the note s section.
I love this particular sculpture over the traditional bronze one with the She Wolf on all fours and the two twins sitting beneath her tummy.
Keep safe!
