Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet!

You have your first vote!

Heaven is a frequent theme her on fanstory but yet you were able to present it in a fresh way.. I like your word choice : ESTATE and it rhymes nicely with gate..and there are other words with similar sounds too.

My question is : even though I'm not baptised, will God let me in , HE can see all and knows if a heart is sincere or not?

I like the pic and the white and mauve colour scheme.

PS: ESTATE in Italian means SUMMER . ( laugh)

How you pronounce it
https://forvo.com/word/in_estate/


Take care!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022

Thanks for reviewing:)
One lady who reviewed this said "God will be letting in 144 thousand souls only!"
I think that is hogwash - no god would turn one of their creations away.

I think you're all good, not to worry :)

reply by tempeste on 03-Apr-2022

I agree,God has billions of children , I don?t see that only 144 thousand souls will be worthy of eternal life.

A question: if one believes in heaven then he/she must believe in Hell.. yet I find it hard to believe God would punish people for eternity .. I just think he would not bring them back to life.

Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

Yes, he has a huge estate. And those angels will be waiting at those pearl gates. For the chosen ones of 144 thousand souls. At the beginning, he tallied who would make it to those gates of heaven. You have a great poem.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022

Thank you:)

reply by Carolyn Dooley on 03-Apr-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

This is a nice poem with a clear message. The imagery is very nice and it flows well. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really nice day. Best of luck with the competition

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022

Thank you for taking the time:)