One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from aryr
A great picture, I loved the picture of the peony and the bee, Gypsy. Your words were great because they showed the effect that the flower has on the bees. Blessed be n hugs.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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A great picture, I loved the picture of the peony and the bee, Gypsy. Your words were great because they showed the effect that the flower has on the bees. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr. It's always good to hear from you, my friend. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is well written 5-7-5 poem and I will add beautiful as the artwork you chose compliments the beauty of your words.
I enjoyed the splendor
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This is well written 5-7-5 poem and I will add beautiful as the artwork you chose compliments the beauty of your words.
I enjoyed the splendor
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Mary. It's always good to hear from you.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like you poem - a good Haiku - about a flower in nature = giving it a personality - flirting with the bee population and being fickle - allowing them to have their way - drink their fill and get drunk on her nectar -
very clever - nicely done = good job
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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I like you poem - a good Haiku - about a flower in nature = giving it a personality - flirting with the bee population and being fickle - allowing them to have their way - drink their fill and get drunk on her nectar -
very clever - nicely done = good job
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Thank you, AP:)
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem about the splendid peony. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem about the splendid peony. You used great descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this beautiful peony in Chinese painting style. Haha. Its nectar made bee drunk. I like the alliteration in the second line. I hope my peonies will bloom soon.
Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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I like this beautiful peony in Chinese painting style. Haha. Its nectar made bee drunk. I like the alliteration in the second line. I hope my peonies will bloom soon.
Well done.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Lisa, for your excellent review. Coming from you it means a lot. I hope your peonies bloom soon.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Those poorly informed bees, can't they read the signs of flirtation and the leaves?
Good combo with selected image and your color scheme.
Mark
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Gypsy,
Those poorly informed bees, can't they read the signs of flirtation and the leaves?
Good combo with selected image and your color scheme.
Mark
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
Nicely composed, Gypsy. The voluptuous flower in full bloom draws the comparison to a beautiful woman with many admirers, intoxicated with desire. Thanks for sharing and for your author notes on the 5/7/5 form.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Nicely composed, Gypsy. The voluptuous flower in full bloom draws the comparison to a beautiful woman with many admirers, intoxicated with desire. Thanks for sharing and for your author notes on the 5/7/5 form.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Julia, for your excellent review. Blessing to you too :)
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I like the symbolism you used here. The peony is like an attractive woman who is "flirtatious and fickle." The bees are like the men that are falling all over her as if "drunk with nectar."
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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I like the symbolism you used here. The peony is like an attractive woman who is "flirtatious and fickle." The bees are like the men that are falling all over her as if "drunk with nectar."
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review. I didn't know about the symbolism lol I write haiku that come straight from my heart and I guess there is some subconscious symbolism going on. It's my muse's fault.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy---I like it, plant sex--err--maybe that's just my take on it? My mind is shallow and always goes straight to the gutter and stays there!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy---I like it, plant sex--err--maybe that's just my take on it? My mind is shallow and always goes straight to the gutter and stays there!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Mike, for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed the imagery in your 5/7/5 poem - The merry bee, flirting with the peony - very sweet! I also enjoyed the alliteration in line two.
Lovely!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed the imagery in your 5/7/5 poem - The merry bee, flirting with the peony - very sweet! I also enjoyed the alliteration in line two.
Lovely!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
