Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

LOLOLOLOLOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

"The talented author who lived upstairs next to Ryan..." WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!

SHANAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!


I can't believe you actually did that LOL. (Yes I CAN believe it.) That is so awesome! Okay first off, I want to say I liked the little changes you made to the previous post and I'M SO GLAD THAT CARRIE'S OKAY!!

I also laughed when I read the description of myself, because I do have poufy hair, and I am a beautiful ebony lol. BUT HOW THE HECK DID I FALL FOR RACCOONS!!!!??? Have me come back and say like, "I knew it wasn't raccoons..." LOL. But no, seriously this was really cool and FUNNY!

I saw your reply and I was like: "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..."

I literally yelled when I first read the part with me in it lol.

But enough about me; I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! (I already kinda know since you told me but... I'M STILL EXCITED!)

SIX STARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SHANA!!!

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022

Thanks AJ :) So thrilled you liked this one. I thought you'd get a kick out of your character's scene. The "racoon" idea just popped into my head, knowing you would laugh about it. Hee-hee!
I'm working on the wedding, which is difficult because I want to make it just right and there are scenes that need to be addressed. Then, I will write in someone going into labor during the reception. I want this to be heartfelt with a fairytale ending. Hopefully I can finish this with one or two more chapters. I know this... I'm going to celebrate when this book is finished.
Stay tuned for more Breedline adventures.

Big hugs!
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 31-Mar-2022

Aww, you're welcome!! I always enjoy reading your posts (especially if it has me in them, lol.) I'm sure you'll write a beautiful wedding scene... you got a thing with description... And going into labor during the reception... I'm guessing that's going to be Carrie... OOO, Oh my gosh I can't wait to read it!!!!! (Btw, that's some hardcore stuff LOL. Starting to have a baby during a wedding? SHEESH. I LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT!

And you know if you need help with any of it... (you already know what I'm going to say)

And a celebration? Man, I wish I could come... ;) ;) I gotta a feeling the ending will be perfect...
;) ;)

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022

Thanks so much, AJ :) BTW, it's not Carrie that's having a baby.

reply by AJ McCall on 02-Apr-2022

You're welcome! AND IT'S NOT!!!!!????!!

reply by AJ McCall on 02-Apr-2022

WHATTTT? NO! THEN WHO IS IT!!!

reply by AJ McCall on 02-Apr-2022

AND WHAT'S RYAN'S SECRETTTTTTTT???!?!?!?!?!?!? I HAVE TO KNOW THESE THINGS...???!?!?!?!

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2022

I'm fixing to put a chapter in. It will give away everything you need to know. :)

reply by AJ McCall on 04-Apr-2022

YAY! LOL. ;)

Comment from Shirley McLain

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this chapter. How many are left? You did a great job, and I found no errors. This almost seemed like the end. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thank you, Shirley :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. It really motivates me to hear positive feedback. I appreciate it!
I will have one or two chapters to write in this one. There will be a happy ending with a wedding and a new baby. Hopefully I will get a lot done this weekend.
My books always end with that "good" feeling. Then, I plan to go back and revise my first two books. After that, I have two more ideas for the next books to come. Book #7 is called Living Nightmares and book #8 is called Vampirism in Manhattan. They will be in the same series. I'm looking forward to starting those.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent story indeed my friend! The storyline is captivating and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together and the imagery is perfect and spot on;-)
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022

Thanks so much, Melodie :)
So happy you enjoyed the chapter. It's been a lot of work, but fun to create. I just have one or two more chapters in this one and then off to the editor. Hopefully I can get some writing done this weekend. It's always exciting to finally see your book in print. I look forward to that.

God bless :)
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I can't help the thought coming through my mind, a bit hackneyed but, all's well that ends well. You've written a most satisfying conclusion to the encounter between the Shadow and the covenant, plus a couple of ring-ins in the form of Frank and Manuel. As always, beautifully written Shana, blessings Roy
Typo : A dark complected woman, complexioned?

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022

Thanks so much, Roy :) I should have just one more chapter to end this book. It will be a heartfelt ending with a wedding and a new baby.
This has taken me longer than any of the others. Hopefully it will get more attention. Your support means a lot to me. And thanks for the typo. I fixed that.

You're the best!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 28-Mar-2022

You?re a good writer, this is great writing Shana

Comment from Rachel Jamerson1

Excellent

Your story exhibits a great deal of imagination. The writer has a lot of freedom when writing about the dark side. Your story is intriguing, and the book should be a great success. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022

Thanks so much, Rachel :)
I appreciate your positive feedback. It really motivates me to keep on writing.
This has been so fun to write. I should have one more chapter to this book and it will be off to the editor. I sure hope readers enjoy this one. My stories always end with that good feeling.

Thanks again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)