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Forgive them

A philosphocal and faith poem

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Comment from nomi338
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We humans, are usually impressed by large things; big buildings, big cars, big ideas. When some hear that Jesus, who was executed for his beliefs, among other things, says that he will return to the earth in full glory to execute judgement against a wicked world, many do not believe, thinking it is too large a task. For the one who conquered the world, no task, no feat is too large. Your posting is masterful, instructive, faith inducing, and a wonderful pathway to a belief that can and will save lives.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks Bro, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from juliet p rucker
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Love the rhythm and the message. Echoes my own beliefs. If more Christians acted more like Jesus and less like God, the world would be a much more peaceful place. Much thanks for your offering.
Amen, J

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks Juliet, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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There is so much wisdom in your words shown in this poem. I often read, and hear, people who have gone through so much pain and loss by the hands of their fellow man, turn around and say they forgive them. I would ask myself 'would I?' I really don't know, Roy. If someone hurt my child, I honestly don't think I could. I think I'd go by God's goodness to guide me.
I read Judi's poem, and will go and get the book. You're right, she is an amazing poet and prose writer. Your poem gave me much to think about, mostly about my choices and decisions. Well done, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks Sandra for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Roy,
In the light of Author Note, it's a nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting the power of forgiveness.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks RP, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
reply by RPSaxena on 30-Mar-2022
    Roy, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Aussie
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A strong poem on the judgement of those who offend us, trample and in some cases kill us. The old man said to Jesus, "how many times should I forgive a man? Seven times?" Jesus replied, " seventy-seven times. And if he ask for your singlet, give him your coat also." We are only human and as such find war abhorrent. Can we find it in our hearts to turn the other cheek? "Vengeance is mine, saithe the Lord."

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks Kay, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
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Roy,
These aabb quatrains remind us that we have to search for the truth in order to save ourselves and others. Judging and grudges only foster and prolong hate. We need to pray for a person's change of heart to make a change in a positive direction.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks Joan, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
reply by dragonpoet on 30-Mar-2022
    You're welcome on both accounts, Roy.
    Joan
Comment from Sanku
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Putin may his reasons ,but destroying a country and the killing the innocent people are not the way,I feel .I pray that his mindset would change ,but i don't know if I can forgive him
But as a general rule you have a very valid point.It is difficult to judge people and situations because what we know as truth may not be truth at all...

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks Sanku, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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Excellent thoughts. Nobody knows the full truth, except for God, and God will judge. Our group has been praying for not only the Ukraine but for the Russian soldiers and also for Putin. It is good to note that the Bible Society, while also distributing food supplies, has been inundated with requests for Bibles from Ukrainians. There are more people that God is drawing into His kingdom, and this often comes through persecution, hard as it is to take. May His will be done, and may many from Russia likewise be drawn into God's kingdom through these desperate times.
Wendy

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks Wendy, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jane Jane King
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This is a very interesting well put poem. Tongues can indeed destroy hope, and ultimately only God can judge. I hope this horrific crisis and misery in Ukraine ends soon. Well done poem, thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
    Thanks Jane, for these wonderful comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from karenina
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I read the poem by Judiverse and see how it inspired you tonight n your own moving post.
Prayer is powerful and essential... the bedrock of our faith. Surely I pray God will touch Putin's heart.... In the interim I understand that innocent victims will do what they must to protect their family. --

Karenina

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
    Thanks Karen, I have cleaned up the notes, and tidied up the poem, I?m going to present this at our church?s prayer meeting this week, I think if we change tack from anger to plead forgiveness, perhaps grace may have a chance, I have never spoken a word in anger about Putin, not because I?m good, but because I felt uncomfortable about joining the chorus..I think God?s voice and heart is in this. Thank you Karen for being so kind in your wonderful comments and generosity. Blessings Roy
reply by karenina on 28-Mar-2022
    Nice work tidying up after "evil eddie!" He does love to edit us into oblivion...

    The greater point of your poem is not lost on me, I assure you.

    I can hate the sins but not the sinner...

    God will judge.

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2022
    Exactly Karen.