Heaven Or Hell
Contest Entry 78 Word 3 Sentence: Dedicated to God34 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have followed the rules and used all the words that were given for this contest. It is hard to write a comment on these so-called fiction pieces about God. Your last paragraph is certainly fiction. God does allow us to go through trials and tests, but He does not send anyone to Hell, we make the choice.
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You have followed the rules and used all the words that were given for this contest. It is hard to write a comment on these so-called fiction pieces about God. Your last paragraph is certainly fiction. God does allow us to go through trials and tests, but He does not send anyone to Hell, we make the choice.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from Tpa
Your short-short has indeed followed the rules of the contest and created some philosophical thought as most religious texts do. For me, it was the paragraph of God making problems. Outside of nature's catastrophes, people, through greed, lust, and violence make their own problems. Good luck with your entry
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Your short-short has indeed followed the rules of the contest and created some philosophical thought as most religious texts do. For me, it was the paragraph of God making problems. Outside of nature's catastrophes, people, through greed, lust, and violence make their own problems. Good luck with your entry
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I was glad to see this classified as fiction, since God takes into Heaven those who have accepted Jesus as their personal Savior. Also, most of the time we make our OWN problems. Good job on working in all of the required words.
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I was glad to see this classified as fiction, since God takes into Heaven those who have accepted Jesus as their personal Savior. Also, most of the time we make our OWN problems. Good job on working in all of the required words.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Mystery writer a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 78 word writing prompt entry, you executed well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello Mystery writer a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 78 word writing prompt entry, you executed well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from Jane Jane King
This poem is perfectly done. You adhered to the rules exactly,
Not an easy thing to do. The last sentence is very clever and sums up the poem and it's message with force. Excellent entry.
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This poem is perfectly done. You adhered to the rules exactly,
Not an easy thing to do. The last sentence is very clever and sums up the poem and it's message with force. Excellent entry.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with you. You said a lot using only a few words and making sure the to use the chosen six words. You did very well with this entry.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with you. You said a lot using only a few words and making sure the to use the chosen six words. You did very well with this entry.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Ulla
Well you have certainly fulfilled the rules that apply to your contest. I will admit I have great difficulty about all the tests God have let fall on 44 million Ukrainian who are dying and fighting to survive, because of one man who is cruel and plainly mad. Good luck.
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Well you have certainly fulfilled the rules that apply to your contest. I will admit I have great difficulty about all the tests God have let fall on 44 million Ukrainian who are dying and fighting to survive, because of one man who is cruel and plainly mad. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Wendy G
I am sorry, but I don't see that what you have written is either true or logical about God, and it doesn't seem to honour His revealed character. What is the point of such contests, which are not exercises in creative writing, but simply of an agglomeration of restricted words? Hope I am not being too harsh but this is not "excellent" writing.
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I am sorry, but I don't see that what you have written is either true or logical about God, and it doesn't seem to honour His revealed character. What is the point of such contests, which are not exercises in creative writing, but simply of an agglomeration of restricted words? Hope I am not being too harsh but this is not "excellent" writing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Fiction PERFECTLY meeting the desired norms!
Impressive phraseology;
Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end incorporating
the required words and depicting the theme TRANSPARENTLY.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the theme.
LAUDABLE Attempt!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of Fiction PERFECTLY meeting the desired norms!
Impressive phraseology;
Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end incorporating
the required words and depicting the theme TRANSPARENTLY.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the theme.
LAUDABLE Attempt!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
Comment from Aspiring2Write
This is written excellently. I know that you are following the guidelines for a contest, but life is not a straight pass or fail test. God gives us blessings and gifts. It is not by our power that we go to heaven but by the underserved love given to us by God. "It For by grace you have been saved through faith. And this is not your own doing; it is the gift of God, not a result of works, so that no one may boast." Ephesians 2:8-9 Just wanted you to know this. Enjoy the contest.
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This is written excellently. I know that you are following the guidelines for a contest, but life is not a straight pass or fail test. God gives us blessings and gifts. It is not by our power that we go to heaven but by the underserved love given to us by God. "It For by grace you have been saved through faith. And this is not your own doing; it is the gift of God, not a result of works, so that no one may boast." Ephesians 2:8-9 Just wanted you to know this. Enjoy the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2022
