Heaven Or Hell
Contest Entry 78 Word 3 Sentence: Dedicated to God34 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the God's Test of Living 78 Word writing prompt contest.
Your poem is very clear and to the point.
God is all Knowing and powerful.
Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent entry for the God's Test of Living 78 Word writing prompt contest.
Your poem is very clear and to the point.
God is all Knowing and powerful.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well. I like the use of the colored fonts, the image, and your message. You gave readers much to think about.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your contest entry reads well. I like the use of the colored fonts, the image, and your message. You gave readers much to think about.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from joann r romei
You did a great job with the prompt. I do not believe that we are being tested purposely, but I do believe there is a holy force that leads us to do the right thing, although human beings in life are tested daily, if that makes any sense, good luck in the contest.
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You did a great job with the prompt. I do not believe that we are being tested purposely, but I do believe there is a holy force that leads us to do the right thing, although human beings in life are tested daily, if that makes any sense, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
God and His son are very much what we need every day. Without them it would be difficult to live, as we need to experience what faith is like. There would be no faith if we did not believe in God. No one wants to go to hell; but heaven promises eternal life.
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God and His son are very much what we need every day. Without them it would be difficult to live, as we need to experience what faith is like. There would be no faith if we did not believe in God. No one wants to go to hell; but heaven promises eternal life.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This piece resonates more with me than others. Though God remains judge and jury it is we who decides to choose the right or reap the consequences. ...
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This piece resonates more with me than others. Though God remains judge and jury it is we who decides to choose the right or reap the consequences. ...
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from Ric Myworld
Believers or not, it would make all of us a better person to follow God's word and live according to His wishes. Although, nothing worth doing is ever easy. Thanks for sharing.
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Believers or not, it would make all of us a better person to follow God's word and live according to His wishes. Although, nothing worth doing is ever easy. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from oliver818
Nicely done, this is a great entry for this competition. It flows well and has a nice feel to it and meets all the requirements of the competition. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
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Nicely done, this is a great entry for this competition. It flows well and has a nice feel to it and meets all the requirements of the competition. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am wondering if Putin will pass the test and I expect he will be a good candidate to experience a living hell in purgatory when the time comes. I think we are tested daily as our actions define us, food for thought here, love Dolly x
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I am wondering if Putin will pass the test and I expect he will be a good candidate to experience a living hell in purgatory when the time comes. I think we are tested daily as our actions define us, food for thought here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from royowen
The only thing that disqualifies any man from passage into Heaven is unbelief, and part of that is living apart from God, one needs to walk beside God, and be part of His will. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy,
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The only thing that disqualifies any man from passage into Heaven is unbelief, and part of that is living apart from God, one needs to walk beside God, and be part of His will. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy,
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good story following the prompt directions.
-A good opening paragraph.
-A very good comparison in the second paragraph
and including the idea of a test.
-A good conclusion about who has done
well with the tests and who hasn't.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Good artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good story following the prompt directions.
-A good opening paragraph.
-A very good comparison in the second paragraph
and including the idea of a test.
-A good conclusion about who has done
well with the tests and who hasn't.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022