Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i love that second stanza!! sunsets and fluffy clouds floating by are the best!

thank you for sharing what makes you happy and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

Thanks!

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

A good job on free verse happiness. The flow of your words have improved over time. I think you should do fairly well in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

This is very sweet .Many things that make you happy are found free...like birds singing,clouds floating,sun setting..they are there for you to chose to be happy .all the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

Thanks!

Comment from Moon baby

Excellent

What a nice poem that was written straight from the heart! I can feel in each verse all of the things that make you truly happy! It's a feel-good poem and I love the artwork you chose such a beautiful sky over the water. Thank you for your lovely piece!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022

Thanks!