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On a Good Day Out Here

Free Form Verse: Sound Embedded

49 total reviews 
Comment from oliver818
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This sounds like a lovely pond to visit. You describe the animals and scenery beautifully. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Thank you, Oliver!

    This one was a joy to pen!
    diane
Comment from Paul McFarland
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That's a good one, Diane. Nice pictures. We have a good number of blue jays that come our feeders. They are really skittish. If you go a little farther north in our state (Maine), you will find the Canada Jay. They are quite tame at times. I have had them eat out of my hand.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Thank you, Paul!

    So pleased you enjoyed!
    diane
Comment from Sally Law
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This is just delightful, dear Diane. A joy to my day and a feast for my poor eyes and hungry soul. I love the fuss of the blue jay. He just misses you. Maybe he wants you to come more often. I know I would.

Sending you my best today as always, and six stars to bless.
Sal xoxo's

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Hello, Sal!
    Between this blue jay and his pesky squirrel friends, I must be missed a lot! :) Quite the symphony when I'm outside, and they all pay me a visit! :)

    I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
    So pleased my offering resonated with you!

    Thank you!
    diane
reply by Sally Law on 30-Mar-2022
    You are most welcome. My pleasure, as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I loved the sound you put with it. I wasn't expecting it. I want to go out there with you. I'm a klutz so I can't do stuff like that alone. We can sit apart and listen alone if you prefer. This makes me super excited about warmer days that are ahead.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Hello, Friend!
    So pleased you enjoyed!
    Embedding the music was a lot of fun!

    Thank you!
    diane
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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An epic write about your nature walk and how wonderful it is to appreciate the wildlife and your words brought the scenes to life here Diane, I enjoyed the walk with you. You never know what you might see when you take a walk in the park or the wood, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Thank you, Dolly!
    This piece was a pleasure to pen; glad you enjoyed!

    diane
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Diane, that's a beautiful free verse poem taking us on a journey to observe what mother nature has in store for us. The imagery is outstanding, and I was there as a keen observer. Wow, I liked this a lot. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Hello, Ulla!
    Goodness!
    Thank you for your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
    This piece was such a joy to pen; I am honored that it resonated with you!
    Hoping your roads are open, and the rain has stopped! Yes?
    We had an ice storm last night and most of today. No venture to Miller's Pond for this gal! :)

    Thank you!
    diane
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Mrs. KT,
What a wonderful piece of Biographical Poetry this is!
You have BEAUTIFULLY depicted Miller's Pond as well as its ins and outs.
Impressive phraseology;
Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end;
Live description of lovely scenes.
It's just like picturization of the Mother Nature's heart.
EXCEPTIONAL in all respects!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Hello, RP!
    You are most kind!
    I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!

    Thank you!
    diane
reply by RPSaxena on 31-Mar-2022
    Mrs. KT, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Jane Jane King
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Beautiful, poetic writing...love the pictures...there is no more precious gift than Mother Nature with all her treasures including the does and birds, especially your grumpy blue jay buddy. This was an absolute pleasure to read and feast my eyes on. Thanks so much for sharing? Can I ask where you live?

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Hello, Jane!
    We live in Traverse City, MI! God's country! :)
    So pleased you enjoyed!

    Thank you!
    diane
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Thanks for this lovely peek into your daily world and the virtual visit to the denizens of Miller's Pond. I know exactly what you mean by 'the oasis of rejuvenation'. I feel the same by venturing outside my house - different birds and critters from you and a different landscape too, but still a calming and refreshing place to drop a few cares and worries.

Great presentation too with all those attractive pics to break up the lengthy text.

Our capital city (Wellington) has an unofficial motto, 'You can't beat Wellington on a good day'. Your poem echoes that sentiment as it revels in the little paradise you are so lucky to enjoy.

Steve

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    Thank you, Steve!
    Much appreciation for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
    New Zealand is on my "bucket list!"
    I reside in Traverse City, Michigan = check it out!

    Thank you, again!
    diane
Comment from lyenochka
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Wow! Fabulous presentation with your reflective free verse that helps us enjoy Miller's Pond. You give us a feast for our eyes and ears and our poetry-thirsty souls. Your slender deer look completely different from the stocky ones out West. Thank you for taking us on this birding walk!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
    WoW, Helen!
    I am honored by your exceptional rating and thoughtful review.
    This piece was such a joy to pen!
    So pleased it resonated with you!

    Thank you!
    diane