Elixir of Life
3-5-3 poem about the way, the truth, and the life.9 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I really like your poem. How we need Jesus every day to remember the feeling of love instead of hate. The words "I hate you" comes to easy for some to say. I wonder if they will say the same thing when judgement day arrives?
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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I really like your poem. How we need Jesus every day to remember the feeling of love instead of hate. The words "I hate you" comes to easy for some to say. I wonder if they will say the same thing when judgement day arrives?
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
With Jesus at the forefront, I don't see how it is possible to hate. It just goes to show how Jesus is not a priority for many.
Comment from MissMerri
This poem is spectacular. I loved the words you've selected ... First line, to bathe in love implies baptism in the love of God, and the second line is so meaningful, as you have combined water with truth. The Bible speaks of being washed in the water of the Word, and we know His Word IS truth. And the last line makes it clear what all of us must do... be cleansed from sin. I hope this gets lots of votes in this contest. It is not easy to pack so much truth into so few syllables, but you've done it with this poem. I loved it. Sorry I've run out of sixes already. ;"( This is most deserving. MM
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This poem is spectacular. I loved the words you've selected ... First line, to bathe in love implies baptism in the love of God, and the second line is so meaningful, as you have combined water with truth. The Bible speaks of being washed in the water of the Word, and we know His Word IS truth. And the last line makes it clear what all of us must do... be cleansed from sin. I hope this gets lots of votes in this contest. It is not easy to pack so much truth into so few syllables, but you've done it with this poem. I loved it. Sorry I've run out of sixes already. ;"( This is most deserving. MM
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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If reviews were rated, you would get a 6 from me for your perception. You have interpreted my poem exactly as I intended when I was writing it. Thank you for your validation.
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That's because it is so well-composed. Thank you for sharing it. My heart was blessed.
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I tried to give you a reviewer's vote but it said i've already used up my 6 nominations this month.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Good spiritual theme.
Good luck in the contest
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Excellent entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery.
Good spiritual theme.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from Mia Twysted
A piece that tells people how they might achieve calm and rest in their lives. To let go and allow the past to fade away so you may start anew learning from it.
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A piece that tells people how they might achieve calm and rest in their lives. To let go and allow the past to fade away so you may start anew learning from it.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I like this because you wrote a poem about "cleansing" water. All three lines address this: bathe, drink pure water, wash. Very spiritual, really nicely written.
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I like this because you wrote a poem about "cleansing" water. All three lines address this: bathe, drink pure water, wash. Very spiritual, really nicely written.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect--enthusiastically spiritual, moving, and so powerful in its message about spiritual renewal by seeking what's pure rather than sinful.
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--enthusiastically spiritual, moving, and so powerful in its message about spiritual renewal by seeking what's pure rather than sinful.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 3-5-3 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 3-5-3 Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. The second line of this poem is very good. The entire poem flows well. To wash away our sins is a good message. The picture compliments this poem well. Nice job.
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This is a well written poem. The second line of this poem is very good. The entire poem flows well. To wash away our sins is a good message. The picture compliments this poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice entry for the 3-5-3 competition. It has a nice feel to it and matches the requirements exactly. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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This is a nice entry for the 3-5-3 competition. It has a nice feel to it and matches the requirements exactly. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
