Seeking The Son's Shine
A 5-7-5 poem of hope through faith.5 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a beautiful poem to go with a lovely picture that illustrates the evidence of hope. You have done a very nice job on this one. Best of luck in the 5-7-5 poetry contest about hope.
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This is a beautiful poem to go with a lovely picture that illustrates the evidence of hope. You have done a very nice job on this one. Best of luck in the 5-7-5 poetry contest about hope.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
The use of "son" in the title and "sun" in the poem is an excellent way of
conveying a moving, reverent message about the Son of God (the Savior) and the sun of nature. Lifting of the eyes symbolizes hope.
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The use of "son" in the title and "sun" in the poem is an excellent way of
conveying a moving, reverent message about the Son of God (the Savior) and the sun of nature. Lifting of the eyes symbolizes hope.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
Comment from Wendy G
I do like the subtle play on words of sun and Son. It is clever. Your image and presentation are beautiful. Your message is true. Faith and trust, without doubting, is necessary. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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I do like the subtle play on words of sun and Son. It is clever. Your image and presentation are beautiful. Your message is true. Faith and trust, without doubting, is necessary. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Beautiful job on this poem!
In so few words, you portray hope & faith together with such meaning! Wonderful poem, & wonderful writing!! I wish you all the best in this contest!
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Beautiful job on this poem!
In so few words, you portray hope & faith together with such meaning! Wonderful poem, & wonderful writing!! I wish you all the best in this contest!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
Comment from Lisa V
I love the picture and the font you chose. It does show hope which is the title of the contest. But is there a typo in the title? I wasn't sure if that was your intention.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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I love the picture and the font you chose. It does show hope which is the title of the contest. But is there a typo in the title? I wasn't sure if that was your intention.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Yes, my title wording was intentional, or else I would have written Sunshine. I like to make readers think, and if there is an ambiguous word to think about, I know I have succeeded in opening someone's mind.
