Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

Yes to being frustrated thinking of something creative and different, memory worthy to write. Your last line says it all. I like the way you changed it the end. Good job. Hope it does well in the contest.

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022

Thanks so much for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Eunice Amero

Exceptional

I see where your coming from. They call that Writer's Block how true. I get that same way. You show how bad you need an idea. Sometimes life walk away then come back later or go to my books for book ideas. Good work.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022

Thank you for this incredibly generous review. I'm glad it resonated with you. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. :)

reply by Eunice Amero on 21-Mar-2022

You are so welcome

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, I love the cute extra in the last line, it shows pure determination, I had smiles throughout and can relate so very well, a wonderful read, very well written, and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022

Thank you for this wonderful review, it really makes my night. :)