If I'm Worthy of a Smile
Saying goodbye while I'm living.16 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Very cool. And I do think our spirits will smile when we depart for Heaven. I also think all believers past and future will be there.
Great entry to the Free Verse challenge and loved your reference to that comforting spiritual song!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Very cool. And I do think our spirits will smile when we depart for Heaven. I also think all believers past and future will be there.
Great entry to the Free Verse challenge and loved your reference to that comforting spiritual song!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Helen. :) I think t's the Jefferson Bible, he took Jesus' sayings and spiritual songs and made the book. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Jose, you have written a great poem. And I really enjoyed reading your loving and heartfelt poem. The picture is great. Take care and keep up the great art of writing.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Jose, you have written a great poem. And I really enjoyed reading your loving and heartfelt poem. The picture is great. Take care and keep up the great art of writing.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Carolyn. :) I'm glad it moved you.
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You are welcome.
Comment from pa Banardi
That was so sad but very pretty and heat felt.To say good bye knowing you will see them good luck nicely done..It is sad to think about leaving your love ones
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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That was so sad but very pretty and heat felt.To say good bye knowing you will see them good luck nicely done..It is sad to think about leaving your love ones
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you, pa. :) You read it right. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your club response, PW. I like the notes that specify where your inspiration came from. Your words are well chosen, the formatting is great, and the message is clear. I like the line 'coming for to carry me away.' Also, the part about what you will be after you are gone is touching.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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You did a great job with your club response, PW. I like the notes that specify where your inspiration came from. Your words are well chosen, the formatting is great, and the message is clear. I like the line 'coming for to carry me away.' Also, the part about what you will be after you are gone is touching.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Jan. :) I'm still here, so it ain't me caressing your hair. :)
Comment from in777wr#
This is a beautifully written poem. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. The mood in this poem is mellow. Your poem flows well, and your message is clear. Nice job.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. The mood in this poem is mellow. Your poem flows well, and your message is clear. Nice job.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you, in777wr#. :)
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You're welcome.
Comment from jessizero
Last words are something that everyone thinks of from time to time. It is good to know where you will be when all is said and done. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Last words are something that everyone thinks of from time to time. It is good to know where you will be when all is said and done. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
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Thank you, jessizero. :) At least I got to say them while breathing. :) Don't know if I'll go there, hope so.
