Would I Survive?
Would I survive the night, with my brother watching me?8 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
-What an endearing story.
-There is humour, antics and kids being kids.
-Delightful characters.
-I like the camaraderie you show through tone and voice.
"He's not heavy, he's my brother" stance.
Loved the tales. Good luck on your entry.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Hello,
-What an endearing story.
-There is humour, antics and kids being kids.
-Delightful characters.
-I like the camaraderie you show through tone and voice.
"He's not heavy, he's my brother" stance.
Loved the tales. Good luck on your entry.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. My brother John and I are blessed, our relationship is stronger today than when we were kids.
Comment from lauralumummu
Wonderful to have such great memories and your brother and you are still close that's great. Well written and worth reading I enjoyed it. All the best, Laura.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Wonderful to have such great memories and your brother and you are still close that's great. Well written and worth reading I enjoyed it. All the best, Laura.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you for the kind words. My brother John and I are blessed to have such a strong relationship.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I loved your story. Your brother was so real in the way you told it, he was definitely someone I would have loved to meet. It's nice to have our memories of our siblings as we get older.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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I loved your story. Your brother was so real in the way you told it, he was definitely someone I would have loved to meet. It's nice to have our memories of our siblings as we get older.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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My brother and I are fortunate to have such a special relationship. One stronger today than when we were kids.
Comment from irishauthorme
Wow. What a story! However, it's great that you guys could make up, and that you are best friends today.
I find too many siblings hold a grudge far beyond the expiration period, and keep the family apart.
Good story, I hope you did well in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Wow. What a story! However, it's great that you guys could make up, and that you are best friends today.
I find too many siblings hold a grudge far beyond the expiration period, and keep the family apart.
Good story, I hope you did well in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading my story. My brother and I have a special relationship and I am forever grateful for that.
Comment from joann r romei
This was adorable, and you are lucky to have had a caring brother, I have three sons and like any parent, my husband and i want them to be close, good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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This was adorable, and you are lucky to have had a caring brother, I have three sons and like any parent, my husband and i want them to be close, good luck in the contest
Comment Written 21-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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My parents had three boys. I was the youngest. My poor mother. We were all good kids, but all boy. Always into things.
Comment from humpwhistle
Brotherly love is a fine thing. I'm glad you and your brother are still close. It doesn't always happen that way.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
bad track record watching me in the past.--Suggest you drop 'in the past'. 'Track record' means essentially the same thing.
Johnny could not have had a better brother.--did you mean to write this twice in the same paragraph?
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Brotherly love is a fine thing. I'm glad you and your brother are still close. It doesn't always happen that way.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
bad track record watching me in the past.--Suggest you drop 'in the past'. 'Track record' means essentially the same thing.
Johnny could not have had a better brother.--did you mean to write this twice in the same paragraph?
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Your help is appreciated. I am lucky to have two great brothers.
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice story, I enjoyed reading it. It's always nice think back on what life was like. I have two brothers and a sister and lots of memories of good and bad times. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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This is a nice story, I enjoyed reading it. It's always nice think back on what life was like. I have two brothers and a sister and lots of memories of good and bad times. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 20-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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I appreciate your reading my story. My brother means the world to me.
Comment from jessizero
This is a good story about you and your brother. My best stories are of me and my sister, so I can relate. You wrapped it up nicely at the end when he shared his drink and you always tell the story. Keep up the good work. :)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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This is a good story about you and your brother. My best stories are of me and my sister, so I can relate. You wrapped it up nicely at the end when he shared his drink and you always tell the story. Keep up the good work. :)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the kind words.
