Lemon-ade
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Comment from estory
Nice to have you back here. I liked how your little poem captures the perseverance of life. When life gives you lemons, make lemonade. And enjoy it. estory
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Nice to have you back here. I liked how your little poem captures the perseverance of life. When life gives you lemons, make lemonade. And enjoy it. estory
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
Comment from Cass Carlton
There is one spag in this happy piece. "Beverage" which has been spelt as bev(a)rage.
Quickly now, change it before anyone else sees.
There now, that's better. The words here echo the saying that "when life throws you lemons
make lemonade". There's nothing like a glass of chilled Lemon-ade sipped at the side of some enterprising young person's cool drinks stall. A few summers ago there was one opened up across the road from my home who did a roaring trade. There were two kids from one family and one from another family who got along very well and had an established clientele. Mainly bus drivers. It was delight to see them lined up and quaffing long glasses of cool, ice encrusted Lemon-ade.
Great stuff. cheers Cass
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There is one spag in this happy piece. "Beverage" which has been spelt as bev(a)rage.
Quickly now, change it before anyone else sees.
There now, that's better. The words here echo the saying that "when life throws you lemons
make lemonade". There's nothing like a glass of chilled Lemon-ade sipped at the side of some enterprising young person's cool drinks stall. A few summers ago there was one opened up across the road from my home who did a roaring trade. There were two kids from one family and one from another family who got along very well and had an established clientele. Mainly bus drivers. It was delight to see them lined up and quaffing long glasses of cool, ice encrusted Lemon-ade.
Great stuff. cheers Cass
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Iza! Where have you been? Good to see you back! I am guessing from this poem that life has thrown you some lemons but I hope you made champagne from it.
And your bevarage of life (beverage)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Iza! Where have you been? Good to see you back! I am guessing from this poem that life has thrown you some lemons but I hope you made champagne from it.
And your bevarage of life (beverage)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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I am working like a dog from 6.30 am to 6.45 pm and week ends:( I am going through some stormy times, I hope it will be over soon... Thanks for your continous support. I really appreciated.
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🙏🙏Hope it gets better soon. 💖
